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Written in the Stars - United (Patreon)

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2023-02-02 14:01:00
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2026-06
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The next instalment for you guys...

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Hadrian v.E.

I can do without the text being ⅓ the power of friendship. 😑 Trelawney didn't even have the decency to off herself to prevent her knowledge of her one (supposedly) true prophecy from being fully learned by Riddle, unless she had such an over-inflated sense of her self-worth. 😒 But on the other hand, I'm sure the alcohol industry will miss her greatly. 😢 While the economic penalty dealt to the dead DEs' Houses by Minister Black is undoubtedly just in this case, hopefully you'll expand more on the statute used in question because without strict scrutiny and standards in place, it's far too easily of an instrument used for gross abuse by the corrupt and greedy. As well, hopefully the amount of power-up the DHs will provide Harry with will be about the same as in WtRBA—that's to say not that obscene. This is why I was reluctant to vote for TRL as the next story, given that, despite being the least worst option, the presumed concentration on the DHs' powers will take importance away from Harry's hardwork and ruthlessness. Lastly, regarding the final pairing(s) of the story: even if Lucinda ends up being best girl, it still behooves you to explore the other options who've been at least partially fleshed out, i.e., Ana, Eleanor, and Pansy. And with Ana being a half-Elf, I don't see why she can't be in serious consideration for the longevity criteria as well. 🧝‍♀️

Sammy the Shark

Neat chapter, can’t figure out why I never got the notification from Patreon though

Bellerophon

Yeah, it’s a new problem for me too.

AlexanderR

Didn't get an email about this for some reason. Loved Cassie seizing the wealth of the Death Eaters. That was absolutely beautiful.

Hadrian v.E.

Same regarding the lack of update email.

I am lord dems

Didn't get an email about this one or even a notification from the Patreon app. Loved the chapter and what Cassie is doing. Can't wait to see what Harry becoming the MoD will bring to him. I'm hoping it will help with voldie's horcrux problem (at least the one in his scar if nothing else), maybe give him the knowledge from the past weilders (great power-up that can make sense), stuff like that

Micklon

I got an Email about a new Password about the time this was posted, maybe Patreon just f***ed up their mail system. Anyway I cant wait until Sunday, really curious about the implications of the Hallows for Harry and Lucinda especially.

Shaitan

Didn’t get the email on this one either. Hope we get to hear Harry’s experience with uniting the hallows next chapter

Jeremy Stroud

I got the password update email but not the new chapter notification [shrug]

Hadrian v.E.

Update: the email finally showed up 3½ hr ago.

Hadrian v.E.

Update: the email finally showed up 3½ hr ago.

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

I actually really enjoyed this chapter. I applaud Cassie’s bold and very needed rebuttal against the Death Eaters. Also, I find Harry’s close-knit relationship with his friends admiring and very canon compliant. Harry was closest to his two best friends in the original HP series, after-all. I also enjoyed something ACTUALLY happening upon the hallows being reunited as well. On a different note, I’ve noticed a good amount of criticism lately. While constructive criticism is welcomed, let’s remember to state the positive attributes as well. I, for one, enjoy your many versions of Harry. I love a slightly powered-up and focused Harry, and I feel as if that’s the purpose of fanfiction: to take your favorite characters and turn them and their plot into something YOU believe is better or just something worthy of reading. I’m enjoying this story and this version of Harry as I’ve enjoyed your previous stories and previous versions of Harry. 💕 Can’t wait for the next installment.

Francis

Only just got the email now

Matthew

I guess I don’t understand everyone complaining about not getting an email. You do a great job of releasing your stories at 9EST on the same days every week. It’s not rocket science people.

LT Butterfly287

One thing I will never really agree with is how in all your stories that feature Draco you go out of your way to make him considerably worse then he ever actually was. Draco was never more then a kid who never truly knew or believed in was he was doing nor did he ever truly want to harm anyone. When Voldemort returned he had a significant change of heart due to his own fear and realization of what exactly they are fighting for, none of the Malfoys really agreed all that much but stayed out of fear.

KristofferXxXxX

Even before I start to read this, I already know what "United" refers to: the unity of the Three Deathly Hallows!