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I should warn you that the beginning of the chapter contains something of a disturbing scene...

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LockNesTom

I really wish Tonks makes it out of there but I'm not hopeful. Harry needs to do something to inspire actual legitimate fear in Voldy and his Dumbasses. I kinda want him to slaughter a good number of them in a single night in their own homes and in their beds. That would be a terrifying display of power to Voldy.

Kevin

This is what should have happened a chapter ago already… Harry, for all his power & intelligence etc, is a fool who’s only reacting, not acting… at least thats the way hes portrayed sofar… he should be out and claiming lives, destroying DE Manors…

Cirex123

good drama but everybody is just so weirdly ineffective in their plans

champagnia

It almost feels like you're purposefully going after Harry's past loves from your works in this story what with Daphne, Tonks, and Narcissa. I wonder if Fleur or McGonagall are next on the chopping block

RyanMK666

nonetheless. (Break) (Break) “What Did we not get an entire section or is this just a typo on your part?

Robert

It feels kind of forced to be honest. Harry is suddenly acting OOC the last few chapters, so much of the buildup was about him knowing what he had to do and being ready to tear down all those who took the mark and Riddle. Now he’s suddenly not acting and everyone seems less competent that expected. Frustrating

Celexs

Well things continue to heat up here. I am really looking forward to Harry's plans for Malfoy Manor. Excellent work as always.

Sunny

Holy moly Tonks and Daphne died. Even though, Harry is mad powerful, he's struggled to keep the main players on the board. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

ck

The problem is the story gets over too quickly that way. Which would be frustrating. But incompetent Harry that doesn't act, is also frustrating....

Kevin

It is… And for the Lord Black to be so blasé about losing family members to Dark Lords but flipping out when he saw gellert…