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Written in the Stars - Hogwarts (Patreon)

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2023-03-12 14:00:04
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2026-06
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Just the epilogue to go now...

Comments

Yash Patwardhan

I really hope you haven't forgotten about the Harry Evans part of this story.

AlexanderR

Very satisfying way to end this confrontation. This story does feel like it finished a bit quickly, compared to "When the Roses Bloom Again," but then I think that makes perfect sense. There's so much unknown, so much you can explore, in a full out war between wizards, involving many nations, compared to a single terrorist cell within one country. I'm looking forward to the epilogue. It's always nice to wrap things up with a bow.

Harharryhar

Voldemort has been defeated almost too easily… The end is a bit underwhelming

Rick Malone

Yeah, I’d have to say that this story just kind of petered out for me. I thought the Durmstrang parts were strong, but once he left the school everything felt kind of rushed and unimportant. Anna and Eleanor felt like they could have stayed for their 7th year at Durmstrang and not impacted the story at all. We don’t see Pansy’s reaction to Daphne’s death, the elemental magic stuff just kind of went nowhere, and the final battle was underwhelming. Overall I love your writing, and are more than thankful with your consistent strong posting. Unfortunately this one just didn’t hit for me. Maybe I’m spoiled by your other excellent stories!

André Ferreira

I kind of liked the way u offed voldemort. I was not expecting it

Tronic42

Well…, I would say you started strong but finished with mediocre results. Like @Rick Malone mentioned, there are a lot of things that are really unexplored. Be it the whole elemental magic or thunderbird topic. We also still don’t know why and how Cain transformed in the dorm in Durmstrang, do we? The „battle“ between Harry and Voldemort also was kind of underwhelming. I understand that you probably wanted to do something else but the whole story/concept is about a strong Harry fighting against Voldemort, but in the end it kind of just…ended. There is also the whole thing with the deathly hallows. You gave him a different kind of magic by letting him reunite them and then completely ignored it later, or did I miss something? Still a nicely written story, just with some unexplored story parts in my humble opinion. Till next time :)

Robert

love your story's yes this was probably my least favourite but for me Im just not a fan of so many oc thanks for your continued effort in writing

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

While this story was my least favorite (although it began as my favorite and kind of just grew rushed as the story progressed), I don’t believe it was bad per se and I actually admire the way you defeated Voldemort. You’ve written a handful of Harry Potter fanfictions now, and while they have all been wonderful, there’s only so many creative ways you can write about one’s defeat. This was very creative, and I can honestly say I have not read anything similar. I liked it.

kieran leadbetter

Enjoyed this story but feels like since they left durmstrang it's stated to feel like it was just going through the motions and the story was just being churned out. Although that may just be me. I am looking forward to your next work... It seems really fresh and original.

Lazy Lemon

Very good plan from the Humble Dumble I admit having be caught by surprise

Purpleeater54

I kind of have to echo what a bunch of people on here have already said and just say that after the first 1/3 of this story things just felt rushed and a bit less than your typical story telling. It's maybe unfair because When the Roses was such an epic that comparing this story to that does it a disservice, but fair or not the character and plot development in Roses felt far more natural and complete than in this one. I was really excited to grow with the motley crew that was Harry and his friends at Durmstrang, but for all that they were interesting characters, it didn't really feel like they were as fleshed out as they could have been. Even Pansy who was introduced seemingly as a main character kind of fell off and really didn't see much development. I think the other thing that somewhat drags this story down is that it is missing the same kind of hook that many of your previous stories did. Yes the time travel thing was maybe a little bit played out, but each of those stories was unique and offered an interesting twist on that trope. Before that we had one of my favorite characterizations of a harry/tom relationship in flower for the soul. This story, while well written as always for your works, just felt a bit more generic. Idk if I explained that well.

Zach B

I have to agree that the end was a little rushed. The same was true for when the Roses bloomed, Voldemort was a little rushed while Grindlewald and the war arc was so well done and original. I love your takes on Harry and the Black family, but I know that you have expressed in past polls that you are interested in doing a GOT story. While I'm looking forward to Reaver, I think it might help to explore another universe for a little while, just to be able to mix up the style and not get too exhausted of the same characters.

Infinity22 ♾️

I've thoroughly enjoyed this story, just like your others. Enjoyed this chapter and glad it ended how it did.

Justaguy33

This fic was great. I especially love the vampire culture little as it was because so few fics include vampire of werewolf culture. I also enjoyed the additional sentient magical races added such as hags and elves.

Maxime Ingouf

Great chapter to conclude yet another outstanding story!

Eric Lachance

The polyjuice ploy was pretty awesome. Harry killing Voldy in an ambush makes sense and is too rare.