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And this is it...

From Sunday, TRL will truly begin.

As ever, I am eternally grateful for all of you for continuing to support me.

Without each and every one of you, I wouldn't be doing what I love.

You have my humble gratitude,

Lee (TBR)

Comments

Jaymoneyman

As with all your stories I’m sad to reach the end because they’re so good. Yet I’m always excited for the next one, because Ik I’ll like it as much if not more. Excellent writing my friend.

Enekoron

Yet another wonderful story. Can't wait for the next one! I love the little inclusion from the last story at the end and throughout!

Cirex123

Im gonna miss this story

Dave

As always your stories are my favourite, they never cease to entertain me. I loved this final chapter, especially the last few lines which put a smile on my face.

CJ

Another brilliant story to add to your collection. Thank you for sharing it with us. I really loved this chapter and similar to Dave, had a goofy grin on my face for much of it.

wild_bill

I really enjoyed this story. I admit I was worried when we first met Elenor Sr. That we would get some element of time travel in order to make up for Harry’s seeming lack of experience vs Voldemort but I’m glad you’ve kept the stories separate. Although I do appreciate the nods to Roses and Whispers in this channel with the sort of multiverse you’ve experimented with in Whispers and the story of Roses touching Elenor’s life here. Very cool. Excited for the next iteration of Harry and his life.

Jacob

Very curious to see if TRL will show the experiences of your previous iterations of Harry. Now that you’ve confirmed a multiverse within your stories. Would be interesting to see the new Harry learning from their experiences with the hallows.

Josh Barney

You are one of the only fanfiction authors that I can depend on to always have amazing stories from start to finish. Keep up the great work

Infinity22 ♾️

Another fantastic story, loved the ending they all had.

Clephne

I loved it, the perfect amount of bittersweet that's needed to end a story. I can't wait to see what you do with the next one!

Eric Crowell

Wow! That's what I call am epilogue! Fantastic work, as always! Thank you for this adventure you've taken us on! It's been wonderful!

Seamus Curran

Have you decided on any pairings for TRL?

El Escobeezy

And thus the Baron Literary Multiverse grows by one. Can’t wait for TRL, I’m curious to see how you continue to develop your stories. They’ve been very interesting so far.

Celexs

Excellent cap to a fantastic story!

Sunny

Mr McCusker's HP universe is growing into fruition. I do feel like we need a huge big bad - the ultimate antagonist - for the dimensional story to work. Re the ending, Harry seemed more happier than he did in 🌹 Bloom, so that's a win win. I just can't wait for the next story now.

Brandon Evans

You are such a gifted writer please don’t ever give up on it. These stories you write are some of the best works I have seen of fan fiction and I’ve read many. Harry Potter, Naruto, lord of the rings, Percy Jackson, Star Wars, inheritance cycle including crossovers between some these and more. I could on and on about the different fanfic categories I’ve read so I’ll say it please keep your muse and joy for writing alive in whatever way works because you would be sorely missed if you stopped writing. 😊

Joe Schumacher

Another great story down. I like the way you acknowledge your multi-verse in your works. I think you could make a version of Harry that plays with that idea very effective. Just food for thought.

AlexanderR

Always makes me a bit sad to see it all come to an end. But I think it was wrapped up very well. I was more sad about Alessia's situation than anything else to be honest.

Tom

Enjoyable read. I hadn’t read any of your works too recently but over the years I’ve consumed my fair share. One thing I’ve never understood about fanficition is everyone’s unyielding desire for the spoiler when it comes to the romantic partner. The inevitability leaves much to be desired (with rare exceptions) I was happy that it didn’t appear all set in stone from the onset at least and seemed for the most part to develop based on written chemistry. I would have to agree with that I wouldn’t mind a bit more of a flawed protagonist, despite my enjoyment. The only actual ‘error’ Harry made in the entire book was the bizarre scene in the Chamber.. in which a failure felt forced just to make him even more hyper powerful and solve the little life expectancy dilemma. Overall, thank you for the piece, I enjoyed it, as evidenced by my 3 day consumption of it. Durmstrang was entertaining and OCs always offer so much room for freedoms and fun. Looking forward to what’s next!

Agelmar101

Firstly I want to say I've been reading your stories on FF for years since Honour Thy Blood through I'd admit I'm not a fulltime Patreon supporter and subscribe only occasionally, that being said what follows I hope will be taken as constructive criticism. For me personally this was one of your weakest stories. To many new characters introduced and I found I really didn't connect or get emotionally involved with any of them, which is such a shame as had high hopes for this story when I first read the prologue. I liked the idea's of the vampire, elf and werewolf friends but I felt not enough time was spent on them or their societies/cultures to give the new ideas enough depth of understanding to bond with the characters as a reader. In all honesty I felt more involved with Cain then Lucinda. The epilogue made me feel nothing honestly as I felt nothing for the characterseven Harry, compare that to when I re-read Honour Thy Blood and everytime I read that epilogue I'm moved to tears and I'm a 50th year old regular guy. Also Fudge in this story made me want to phyiscally throw my tablet across the room when I was reading in frustration at how dumb you made him. It was like you watched the films and used that Fudge as a reference and dailed up the stupidity by a factor of 10. I hate to reference Honour Thy Blood again but I believe it's that story where you write the most believeable version of canon Dumbledore I've come across when he explains to Harry his reasons for leaving him at the Dursley's. As a writer you made me get on board with his reasons and the fact Dumbledore admitted his mistakes, he had made with Harry rather then most fanfictionstories and just turning him into a bashing character. Get back to writing like that, write a Fudge that we as a reader can understand why he so scared of admitting Voldemort is back, make him a real living person with fears and faults not some dumb paper-thin pantomine villian that he seemed to be in WitS, it was honestly frustrating as hell to read. I mean at one time he most of been fairly competent politician to get voted as Minister. I don't expect you to make a hero of characters like Fudge I just want understand why they are like they are in your stories and not just think to myself oh its movie Fudge or Umbridge etc. As writer you have written amazing characters before that lets face it we had very little to go on even from canon eg Bellatrix. The treatment you gave Bella and Peter in Stepping Back touched on the reasons they were like they were in canon, and you managed to redeem both characters but in a very believeable way. I think the scene in Stepping Back in the RoR where Peter says his fears for how things will change after school and the rest of the Marauders convice him that he's wrong is a beautiful moment between characters. I felt WitS lacked this depth. Sorry to go on but just some of my frustrations I had with this story. PS I read all types of stories on Harry Potter FF and all different pairings but I hold out hope that one day you might do a believeable Harry & Hermione pairing :)

Chesterton

What a wonderful story my friend. You have a gift and I’m so thankful to get to be a beneficiary. Thank you thank you!

Xoumapwet

I really like that epilogue, probably one of my favourite from all of your stories. The only thing I found surprising is the absence of the thunderbird and Fawkes, we have no conclusion for them which is sad knowing the major role they have in this very long and fulfilling life.

BeansNCornbread

I could read 100 more chapters of this universe. Excellent read. I can't wait to start your next one.

Andrew

I loved this, thank you

Brian Norton

Became a member after reading the start of this on ff.net.

Brian Norton

Glad i did! A longer epilogue of the 1000+ years, or another Dark Lord uprising after 50 or so would of been my only ask haha

Tyler smith

Honestly? This one wasn’t so bad, definitely could’ve been better if you ever rewrote in the future. Your writing has gotten even better I’m sure as the latest stories show