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Amazing chap wait for more

AlexanderR

I feel like I'm missing something in regards to the Peverell's and their connection to death. Are they not all seeing the figure? I thought Gawain saw it when Ignotus died. And wouldn't they all be visited on their 13th birthday? Except for Carys, I think I read. So, why wouldn't they believe that Death was coming to collect Gawain?

Lee McCusker (TheBlack'sResurgence)

They would have, but they feel more disconnected from Death than either Gawain or Ignotus did. Even Gawain was more disconnected than his father because he did not experience what Ignotus did in the churchyard. All Arthur and Glyn have is the one experience when they were children and what their father had told them. It will become something of folklore with each passing generation

WaltD

AMAZING!!!

Jonathan W.

I was thinking the same thing

Jonathan W.

Question regarding a previous chapter. How is Harry able to use magic during the summer without tripping the underage sensors?

Lee McCusker (TheBlack'sResurgence)

Because he is in a magically populated area when not at school or within the Flamel home. Even in Canon it explains that it is down to parents to ensure children aren't using magic

Alex Lafrance

this chapter was amazing! One of your best stories for sure! Keep the great work!!!

Robert

This is easily one of my favorite chapters of all the stories you have written. This story is definitely tugging harder on the emotional strings than some of your others but in the best way possible. Harry’s growth both emotionally and magically feels realistic. The only other two stories that have involved a younger Harry both had much different feels. In Flower Harry was magically stronger at this point I think, especially from a fighting standpoint. But he was much more closed off. The 7 years prior to Tom’s intervention weighed heavily. In Wirtten in the Stars he never had the Dursley’s as a burden but his mindset was solely focused on defeating Voldemort and everything else seemed secondary, and he had a crueler nature. Firmly grey or dark grey. In this story Harry has suffered the Dursley’s and didn’t grow up training magically so he obviously wouldn’t be on par at this point in time with the other two stories Harry. But he is experiencing a semblance of what it would be like to have a family through the Cloak’s memories through the eyes of the Peverell’s. With the involvement of the Flamels, he has been given the chance to be cared for by Adults in his life who truly just want the best for him and to help him grow in what he needs to become. But they are just giving him the tools. Harry in this story has friendships and trusts some of the adults in his life. He understands pain and loss and the burden he has. But he isn’t letting it fully consume him. I think he could eventually be the most well-rounded Harry you’ve ever written. Brilliant work thus far and I am excited to see how this story continues to move forward and develop. (Also liked the Evans daughters name easter egg included) Cheers!

Jonathan W.

But the graveyard isn’t a magically populated area?

Celexs

This is such a fantastic story, I am really enjoying the snap shots of the previous holders of the cloak. It as a dimension to the story I havent seen before. Excellent work as always.

Sunny

Yess... Expecto Patronum!!! I think Harry obtaining a corporeal form in his first try is a tad overtop and we need to be careful he doesn't become OP, like in the last 2 stories. The steady progression made things believable. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Sunny

I think Godrics Hollow is one of the few Muggle/magical villages and so it goes backs to the above re magically populated areas and the ministry not able to pick up the trace.

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

I especially enjoyed this chapter. I enjoy Harry’s small and believable advancement; however, I find myself worried as his fourth year approaches and in return, so too does Voldemort. Alas, your writing and storytelling has been amazing. I’m very excited to see Harry’s and Sirius’s meeting eventually as well.