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Last chapter of third year... the world cup is next, and then we delve into fourth year...

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thevolunteer

Harry went hard on Fudge and Malfoy. Way Hard. I love it.

Sage Berthelsen

I like who Harry is forming up to be. It’s a mix of your other ones but I get the strongest impression of the Serpent. Ooohh can’t wait for more! Come Death, come.

Joe Schumacher

I do have a critique of this chapter. Given how Harry is perceived at this point in the story, before he said or done anything to "subversive", and who he will be in a few years, it makes more sense for the sniveling suck up that Fudge is to side with Harry, or at the very least be significantly more diplomatic then he ended up being in this. It serves him no purpose. He is still a politician after all. Other than that, I am loving how this story is shaping up. Keep up the great work!

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

I absolutely loved the scene of Harry handling the Wizengamont. I frequently wish something similar would have occurred in the canon series, but I’m a sucker for the underdog winning and winning in the largest way possible, in all honesty. Your writing and storytelling was very impressive, as per usual.

Sunny

The hearing was really entertaining. I hope Harry does become Quidditch player in this one. Also, during the summer, it'll be cool to see Harry stay with Sirius and Remus and have a heart to heart. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.