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The first task draws ever closer....

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Eric

That’s one way to deal with RS. I was kind of hoping that he stepped on her in her big form and took care of the issue permanently

E. Machado

I'm glad that the pairing still seems to be a little open, nothing against Katie but she is just a little bland imo. Daphne, Fleur, or Gabrielle are way more interesting and can bring other world-building elements to the story.

Κωνσταντίνος Σφυριδάκης

I don't know of you want to avoid pairings that have already happened but the build up , up to this moment, with French-speaking harry and Gabriel being on the same age with Harry seems like a nice way to follow. Kate as until now has showed a crush on Harry but I'd like to see a girl that can understand and even maybe accompany him in his journey to his legacy..Also, one of the best things on fanfiction is the POV of other people on Harry, especially of other students.

WaltD

Amazing chapter, Harry’s interaction with Daphne was most interesting as was the conversation with the Delacours. I don’t know about the pairing but wouldn’t mind if it developed naturally with Harry interacting with more than one witch before he gets into anything. Harry’s conversation with the lovely Ms. Skeeter is very well done as well. The one thing I am not certain about is how I feel about Harry’s interpretation of his latest vision but look forward to seeing how it develops. Thank you for a most memorable chapter.

Sage Berthelsen

I love Fleur’s family for the world building aspect but Greengrass gives Harry a hero point for fixing the blood curse. Granted I’ve read so much fanfiction I can’t remember if that curse is canon or not.

RyanMK666

Woah hold up first task?! I had to travel for work so I’ve still only read chapter 1 man I have some catching up to do! This is going to be a good read in my down time at work.

RyanMK666

I believe it is canon, since Astoria died while married to Draco shortly after seeing her son go to Hogwarts. I could be wrong but this is what I remember about the canon side.

Robert

I really enjoyed the flashback in this chapter. Seeing how past families (including his own) have viewed governance was well done, and Harry forming his own opinions and not jumping to any conclusions fits his character. The character interactions were great all around. The Gabrielle introduction was well done and the way you described the Veela Maturity, seems like the Second Task could set it off. Looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers!