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Alex Lafrance

Original way to deal with this little dragon!

Lord Blackadder

Out of so many first tasks I've read, this has to be my favorite interpretation. Masterfully written good sir!

Freeman

Damm. That’s all I have to say.

Draco Pendragon

Wonderful chapter! Loved the way he dealt with his dragon. And if I were to guess as to the pairing in this story, my money would be on Harry/Gabrielle.

Cameron

I was expecting a more bombastic display of ability from Harry but that's just my own expectations getting ahead of the fact that he was efficient in completing the task. I wonder what else he's learnt from the Peverell book.

Mouse Pen

Awesome dragon fight and magic. Gabby and Harry internations are fun but i'm counting on Harry and Katie as it was created before

That Guy

Good one. Nice twist on the task, and the conversations before and after were quite entertaining.

V_Arko

This chapter was everything you could want for the first task it was just brilliant. But my favourite part was Gabrielle and Harry talking, the dynamic between them is fantastic.

Robert

Created? I mean they were introduced before and they’ve had conversations and it appears there is a small one-sided crush on Katie’s part, but there hasn’t been anything on Harry’s side that would lead us to believe he sees her in a romantic way really. She feels similar to Eleanor from the last story. A close friend of Harry’s who has his back.

Sunny

A brilliant creative way of retrieving the golden egg. It's felt natural when you've included the flamels and they read like Harry's grandparents. Also, it's pretty cool that Harry speaks French. I do wish you'd include Sirius more. Anyway thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

I absolutely loved it. I can honestly say I’ve never seen, heard or even dreamed of Harry’s approach to the first task as you’ve so gracefully illustrated. This was an amazingly, well thought-out chapter.

Sage Berthelsen

Oooohhhhh!! I don’t think I’ve seen a serious Gabby romance! She’s always forgotten or added on in other romantic relationships.

Robert

Really loved the way Harry completed the task. I wonder how Sentient Death’s magic is. Fun dialogue between Harry and Gabrielle after the task. Also really like how you showed the Ron POV. Don’t really see that too often, especially in stories that include the GOF. Excited to see where everything goes from here!