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The Reaver's Legacy - The Hospital WIng (Patreon)

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2023-06-25 13:00:06
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2026-06
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The aftermath of the second task...

Comments

Roan

Is it just me who is uncomfortable with Katie and Harry pairing? I mean Katie is fine and all but somehow is just lacklustre compared to other pairings on other books.

nick shamblin

I actually deeply enjoy the Katie and Harry pairing. Its one that starts and feels natural. Of course Harry is gonna spend time with someone who never treated him as if he were the boy who lived. I deeply enjoy the connection to Death. It reminds me of a Patron from DnD for a warlock; they give a task, are summoned and explains aspects of their role in riddles and convoluted truths. Its perfect.

WaltD

WOW!!! Amazing chapter with a lot of plot development. New alliances, new abilities, budding romance and so much more. Katie’s POV at the end was also really well done as it allows us to feel closer to her character as well.

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

I really enjoyed Harry’s interaction with death; it was the perfect way to introduce Death’s view of Harry as His champion compared to his rocky relationship with Harry’s ancestors. I also enjoy Katie’s character and the relationship her and Harry are beginning to form. I can’t wait until Thursday!

Francis

I'm personally hoping for a daphne x harry pairing tbh hoping for some development to happen on that front I'm not to bothered by the katie shipping just not made up with the pairing either.

Stephen Tracy

... Does Barty not realize the blood must be forcibly, *knowingly* taken? There is a reason Voldemort had Harry tied to that statue and that the ritual didn't start until Harry had been woken up/head cleared At least, that's my thought. Bone of the father, unknowingly given - This suggests such a thing as knowingly/unknowingly is important for the ritual. Barty can't even say he had forcibly taken the blood - Harry was unconscious/had just been in a wicked battle. Hell, barty didn't even wound him and take the blood himself (Assuming his actions with the lake doesn't count as him 'forcibly' taking it). Bah, I'm rambling. Anyway, unless it really doesn't matter, I don't see Voldemort doing anything more than staring at Barty and speaking in small words so that an idiot like him understands even the basic principals of this resurrection ritual. Unless Barty lies about the exact manner in which he stole it, anyway. My thoughts, is all.

Momotaz

Great chapter. Though, I don't know, have mixed feelings about the pairing. Maybe I am bias as I tend to favour like Daphne or Fleur ect... the pairing is too simple ..... who knows, it might not last. But anyway, look forward to the next chapter.

Jonas Engell

That plus all the poison used by the merepeople on their weapons is likely to have an interesting affect on the ritual.

Momotaz

Feel the same....pairing is too simple, feels like Harry/Ginny pairing....based on how much she was in the chapter, probably is the main pairing.

Zai

What does your Katie look like? I don't think you have written a description of her in this fic unless I have forgotten it.

Rogue

A little on the short side, but it was a nice chapter.

E. Machado

I agree with you but, short of her death, it looks like she is the pairing, and to me, the whole interaction between them in this chapter was really weird.

Chesterton

Personally I’m hoping for Harry/Gabi but it seems rather Harry/Katie which is fine too! Maybe you can give DarknessEnthroned Katie the happy ending she deserved haha

Sunny

It's not just you, but I feel - hopefully - that there might be twist, cause we've still got at minimum 2+ yrs.

Sunny

I feel we're getting into dangerous territory where Harry is revered as the perfect hero. Like he's what 14, probably on like 6th year level magic, but he seems more and more unbeatable. I feel we need to dial it down a bit, cause at this rate he's gonna be seen as the second coming of Merlin. The reason everyone likes Harry is cause of his determination and not his magical prowess. Re Harry and Katie, I wholeheartedly echo Roan's comment that it's a tad lacklustre. The only way I see it is that her character is part of Harry's overall character development. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Robert

That Katie was more developed lol. This Katie feels more like The Green In The Grey Katie which is ok for the side pairing but she doesn't feel developed enough to be the main pairing at least not yet.

rishi547

I’m not sure why, but I feel like Katie might be developing a sort of yandere personality, with the way she thinks about Harry, it seems abnormal. Lovely chapter as always.

V_Arko

I’m super excited to see Harry meet with the Delacour’s in hopefully the next chapter? And most importantly how my favourite character aka Gabrielle is recovering from the lake and fingers crossed it kicks off her transformation. Awesome work as always Lee!