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Darkness and more darkness to come...

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Granal Dmello

Damn, I hope that isn't true. I have to read it. It would be a horrible spoiler May I recommend deletion ?

Максим Паюк

I knew Katty would be killed, but I didn't expect Barty to be allowed to escape.

Joshua H

Definitely, absolutely, one hundred percent has nothing to do with the above comment... but is there a way to make it so I don't have to see replies to these posts? Kind of annoying having to half avert my eyes whilst also downloading the chapter every time.

Freeman

That was just bloody cruel.

Sébastien Boussely

I hate having Katie dead 😢 but it s a really a great chapter

Jake Vining

Why can’t the girl get a good ending for once

Gummyking2

I kinda agree with crouch jr lol, Harry only got 2? I like the story and the twist at the end, but I feel like Harry’s power and abilities are inconsistent. The tournament pretty much had the same result as canon even though he was significantly more capable

Chesterton

Incredible chapter. Come death come. I think this story could be titled “Harry Potter: The Punisher edition” Well done sir

PsyChung

Harry wanted Katie back so killing more deatheaters wasn't his priority

MickyDontCare

Holy shit dude...freaking loving this!

Rick Malone

I had a feeling Katie wasn’t going to make it. Every other story you’ve written had the love interest from the beginning feel “locked in”, for lack of a better term, even before they and Harry got together. In this story there always felt like something was holding back the Harry/Katie pairing. The Barty Jr angle is interesting, and I’m digging it so far. My only request is please don’t go too far with him. This means don’t have him encased in plot armor so he can continue to torment Harry the entire story. Nothing is more aggravating to me then the bad guy who keeps getting away by some ridiculous turn of fortune. This story has the chance to be your best because it’s the first one where I honestly have no idea where it’s going. Who’s the love interest? How will Harry respond to Katie’s death? Who else can now die? I love having to wait for these questions to be answered.

PsyChung

Sorry but I saw that coming... her death was logical to unleash harry. Crouch's escape was unexpected.

Yomira Ullon

Poor Harry, I feel that when he is a little happy they take away that happiness all at once, the results of this will not be beautiful and in the end Barty won

Will Bonner

Had a feeling this was coming after last chapter. I think maybe why some of us were not feeling this pairing was since Lee had this planned from the start and subconciously (or intentionally) reflected that as he wrote their relationship.

Sammy the Shark

Ready for Harry to go full bore after this, I knew it was coming but damn that hurts bud. He gonna be a monster. Hope he gets at least a lil more happiness at some point.

Robert

Finally a love interest of his is killed and Barty Crouch Jr actually survives in a way leaving the good guys stumped and his father framed. I am hoping you don’t lock in any love interests for a long while. Let him pick between two that way we don’t have a framed script. This is real life not arranged story telling.

Lazy Lemon

Ah, my heart bleed. It is already rare to have Katie close to Harry. We saw it coming but it doesn't hurt any less. Damn.

Rodrigo Méndez

Fck, I hate that Katie had to die, but now we got to see a full killer mode for Harry, I mean I would even put him in a Venom Black Suit instead of his regular robes just to add more impact

Rodrigo Méndez

I loved the chapter but man, you’re sadistic, I mean, Katie, Moody and besides jr escapes. I hope beyond hope he isn’t the main villain and I hope Harry enjoys every minute of putting him under the cruciatus before killing him with his own hands

E. Machado

Sigh... This was a great chapter whith really good writing, I just wish Katie didn't have to die, even if I disliked her as a pairing. Your fics are getting progressively darker.

Cameron

Well that was a depressing end to a chapter. I'm gonna need to read something cheery before going to sleep now.

Francis

Well damn that was ruthless but great I thought she was gonna die at some point but not like that! I'm still holding on for the daphne pairing! And that's just got a hell.of a lot easier now. Awesome chapter!

K

Great chapter! Having BCJ keep going, what a twist! Looking forward to more!

Micklon

I download directly from the email, does'nt open patreon itself for me, so I dont see spoilers.

Dan Dorr

I do it from the app

Josh Barney

It disappoints me that you handed him the map and he never once decided to actually pay attention to it. Like come on man you’re telling me you wrote him like that to not get curious and just stare at the map for a while? But I guess that would’ve been too easy

LockNesTom

Your writing has been getting darker lately not sure it's a good thing, but still. I don't think Voldy is going to be pleased with Crouch Jr. Setting up his fellow subordinates to be killed and removing a valuable piece from the board that could be exploited? No I'm not sure Crouch would survive Voldys wrath

Joshua H

Excellent idea. Definitely doing that from now on. In this particular instance I just assumed that no one would be enough of an arsehole to write such a spoilery comment literally 10 minutes after the chapter dropped.

Casey F

Damn that was a great chapter by far my favorite of the book. I am sad how it played out but it was incredibly engaging and Barty is a amazing character.

SilverMugs

I can say that I would not be surprised that Harry would change for the worse. This entire sequence of events happened under the watch of people who were supposed to be on high alert for this. From the Goblet, the tasks, the Imperius, Moody/Barty the entire time, letting the perpetrator escape, allowing his kidnapping, and then for some reason stopping him from even having the chance to potentially hold her one last time? That line of "don't make things worse" or however it was phrased would certainly stick in my mind. Like, "How can I make things worse when you have already lost and you let this happen?"

SilverMugs

It never really makes sense when it happens in any fic

Ty'Renieshia Haynes-Roberts

I honestly didn’t believe Katie would die, so I, for one, am shocked. I do believe this will unleash the part of Harry which carries the ability to defeat Voldemort. Furthermore, I hope the eventual pairing is Daphne/Harry if not Katie/Harry. But I think Harry performed well against Voldemort. He took down two of his supporters and held his own (which a lot of adults can’t do). I liked it.

Burkley

Damn I was really hoping Katie would live through this. I’m kinda hoping for Harry going dark after this

Sunny

Bravo 👏👏 Mr McCusker. The duel was epic and I liked how you were able to tell us where Harry is magically compared to Voldy. I'm sad for Katie, as you did write her character really well, but the death of her and Moody, along with Jnr's escape, added to the jeopardy of the war and made it more realistic, i.e. the ruthlessness of the Death Eaters. I can't wait for the 2nd part of TRL. While I like the flamels, I do hope to see more interactions of Harry with Sirius, Albus and Hermione & Ron during the summer before 5th yr. Also, it will be cool if we get more James memories than those of Charlus. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Josh Barney

True enough. I’ll get over it eventually

Celexs

Well shit that went way different than I was expecting. This is going to turn way darker than i had originally thought. Excellent work.

odzoo

I though it was likely that Katie was going to die. I wasn't hoping for it, but it seems like Harry's summer in France is going to be important and I think Katie still being around would mess that up.

El Escobeezy

It’s going to be a Harry/Gabrielle ship

Jason Williams

Holy shit I love that I hate you right now that was soo good like perfect their whole “romantic” relationship I was feeling it’s all happening too fast/ easy now I get it you just wanted the biggest impact and you’ve done it masterly bravo.

Toxicpiranah

Jesus people, spoilers, I caught sight of a comment before I even downloaded the chapter...

V_Arko

I had the same problem it is rather annoying.

Kugleburg

Since I saw a spoiler a few chapters back I've taken to using my hand to cover the part of the screen where comments load so I can download the file and click away without reading anything.

champagnia

If I had a nickel for every fic that teased a Katie relationship only to use it as an impetus for Harry, I’d have two nickels. Which isn’t a lot but it’s weird that it’s happened twice

Eric

One of my favorite chapters so far. Wrapped up the terrible HP/KB relationship.

Kris Mota

I hate you right now. I wish I'd forgotten about this story and hadn't paid for the patreon