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This is either late or early, depending on how you look at it. Either way, t is a longer chapter for you to enjoy...

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Hades

yay!

Brian

Thanks for your hard work. Great chapter!

Nick

I love it. Can’t wait to see how the tourney turns out. Already seeing little changes like Rhaegar not being enamored with Lyanna.

Frodran

Yet…the seeds may have been planted. We won’t know till the next Rhaegar POV

Will_Pilgrim

Love it! Lots of interesting directions this could go...

Paradoxys

I think this is probably the best story of yours so far since When the Roses Bloom Again! I hope it gets more frequent updates!

Snewp

Awesome! Seems like Rhaella maybe recognized Jon’s Targaryen blood.

Austin Truong

I love this and the different perspectives. Thank you for all the ways you set the scene and flesh out these characters. Really appreciate the longer and deep world building you are crafting up these past few chapters

AlexanderR

Reading this was the best way to end the day. I'm really enjoying this story. All of your Harry Potter stories are great, but there's only so many times Harry can fight Voldemort in one way or another before it's a little old. You compensate for that well by adding a great twist, like this most recent one and Harry inheriting/acquiring(?) the Peverell magic. The interactions with death and the unique hatred he has for Barty. But it's still nice to come to this, which we haven't seen from you before, and the fact that Jon, as the hero, can have a whole bunch of different enemies (Others, southern houses/kingdoms, particular lords/ladies).

Dhaval Patel

The best asoiaf story I have read and the best of yours too. Hope it gets regular updates like your hp stories.

thevolunteer

Jon reading to children in an orphanage is a bit much. Kinda beating us over the head with how great he is

stevem1

Jon and Arthur being set up as rivals, both because of their skill and Ashara’s interest in Jon, is interesting.

Yomira Ullon

Thank you for updating I really like this story, I'm dying to watch the tournament

FangRu

This is such a great story. Its really thrilling that I have no idea where the story will go with Jon there even though I know its supposed trajectory.

Tom Franke

Thanks Baron, I love these chapters 😜

Francis

Really enjoying this! Can't wait to see jon an Arthur go at in the tourney!

Thor

Nice! I can't see things to end well after the king joined the tournament.

Clephne

Loved it, you don't know how happy I was when I woke up and saw the update, I think its truly one of your best stories, I really love your portrayal of Jon and the perspective you add to the story, honestly my only wish is that you would give it priority over your next fic so that we can have more frequent updates

Lord Peverell

Loving this story so far ! Can we have this become the main update after the current HP story gets over ?

Sunny

There was a small hint, but we could possibly see Jon going to be forced to join the Kings guard, cause there was a brief point made that they were a man down. Obviously I'm not an asoif expert, so I'm not sure if his duties as Lyanna's sword take precedent, but given the King's paranoia and need for protection he may demand Jon be at his side. This would then also bring Lyanna & Rheager closer, assuming she would move to the capital. Then again, this could all be wrong and Jamie still takes his spot. It was nice to see that you gave Jamie a brain & not make him a dog for Cersei. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

RubMyLantern

It can never be earlier than we hope it to be 😊