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Will it all come good in the end...

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Sammy the Shark

Half of us: yeeeesssss Harry is handling the giants, it’s time for a show down with Tom! The other half: oh my god he finally chose a girl thank goodness

Sal

The pairing is disappointing, I just don’t see any chemistry between them. Idk your pairings lately have been odd. Your stories follow the same script, which is why I’m hoping you updated the GOT story more.

Clephne

Honestly I truly didn't know who to support for the pairing, but I'd have been disappointed if it was not her, they've shared too much not to. Though I could have done with more build up, perhaps if Harry hadn't taken so much time to get rid of Crouch but oh well, the true pairing I'm excited about is Jon/Ashara you cannot not put them together

AlexanderR

By the end here, Isabella and Harry felt a bit more natural. With Voldemort heading to the continent, it seems like this could be a bigger ordeal than originally thought. But since it we're coming to the end, doesn't seem likely. That scene with the giants was incredible. I could do with a situation like that in every chapter lol.

Eric Lachance

Nice to see Harry's proposal to Isabella. Btw, when did Harry get rid of Voldemort's undead followers? I remember him planning for it, but not it happening. Voldemort was acting like they were gone.

colm 123456789

Have to be honest and say the love story in this one has been non-existent. Could have picked any of them and it would have felt equally unearned. Picked the one with the most time in the story but the least chemistry. Might even have been better to pick none and leave an open ending for who he ends up with

Sunny

I like Isabella in this story, cause she seems really brave to just put her heart on her sleeve and lay it all out. Having said that, the pairing is slightly off in that wasn't really organic (& I get it not all relationships are, but you don't really go straight for marriage). Also, it would be great to see an older Gabrielle and Harry again in a future story, but probably give her less embarrassing moments 😅. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

Chesterton

I get that this one was t a love story and more about the peverell/potter thing but I found that rather disappointing. Especially since you teased us with three potential deals. Why not just leave all of them out post Katie and not shoe horn Isabella in at the end? Great work as always otherwise. Here’s to hoping Amelia is an actual romance! You write those very well

Lord Peverell

Overall fantastic chapter Lee !! Loved the ending between Harry and Isabella !Still wondering how will you tie the loose ends about the 2 debts that Harry owes Daphne and the debt that Delacours owe Harry !

Bk22

Not super compelled by the Isabella ending to be honest, she just hasn’t been compelling like some of your previous stories previous female leads and is overall just sort of boring

Rogue

I’m raising both hands, cause I’m in both groups! I do have to say that I’m a little disappointed that Harry didn’t go with Daphne (I’m a big Daphne fan), but I think Harry chose well.