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I have included an A/N at the end of the chapter to avoid spoilers here...

Of course, we will move on to the Harry/Amelia story next, which will be a lot of fun. The first chapter of that will be with you this coming Thursday.

Comments

Deity

Why you gotta go and make me cry like that?😭 Still excited for the next story!

Druw Van Der Werff

It ain't often a story makes me feel anything, well done sir

Markus Antonius

Great job! You are right thematically it makes sense for this bittersweet ending

Santiln

Good one

Eric Schulz

Sad but fitting ending to a great story

Dave

What a perfect ending for yet another brilliant story.

Abhishek Kumar

Wow, perfect ending for this story, no apologies needed. I feel, somewhere, I started wanting more of the Sword story because this was taking a very very serious route, but the ending did true justice to it. Cheers to the bittersweet ending and thanks for the story Baron.

Colm Mansfield

Goddammit Lee making people cry like this. shame on you

rahul kumar

Beautifully written... Very moving..

Kevin Henderson

This is an amazing story. One of the very best.

Lord Peverell

Superb ending Lee !! Peverell line lives on via James..:)

DarkLordBlack

Perfect ending to another great story, sad but perfect. Thank you Mr. McCusker and well done. Looking forward to the next one ❤️

André Ferreira

Beautifull ending, suitable. Thank you once again for your marvelous work that keeps the magic of HP alive

champagnia

I literally went into the next to last chapter thinking about ‘Okay what new coat of paint is going on the Harry beats Voldemort wall this time’. But this was a very well done rug pull that made me appreciate how we really can’t know how this fated fight will end until we get to it

Randal Durham

Spectacularly bittersweet. Well done. Would’ve liked a scene with the Flamels, but…

Dennis Seeger

This was the perfect ending. All in all I would say this was your darkest entry in your Potterverse so the ending fit that perfectly while also still giving the hard hitting feelings that you are so good at delivering at the end of each story

Harharryhar

Great ending Lee. A very novel ending. I am also looking forward to All for you - that seems to be quite different in tone with a playful Harry

Err hello

I was grumpy when I first read the ending. But then towards the end of the epilogue I saw reason. It was the only way it could go. It was just unfortunately abrupt, and I should’ve realized when there were only 3 chapters left and the wedding just happened.

Robert

This was good and bad for me, the story was good and the ending while bittersweet makes sense. The bad part for me is that I dont re read stories with this type of ending but thanks for the fic great ride as always.

Vlad X

Great work, tnx!

CJ

Absolutely devastating ending. And, an absolutely epic ending. Well done, another fantastic story completed.

Zeedaka Jenkins

Not to get into any spoilers, but I am so glad you ended this story this way. Honestly it gave it so much more depth and feeling. You did a amazing job with this and I feel that you should end another one similar in a future work.

Sunny

HEY.... I called it (see past comments on other chapters). I did sense something ominous for this Harry and I'm glad that you didn't have him create a horcrux. While it would've been a surprise, you're ryt that it would've cheapen Harry's arc. A paragraph from Hermione and Ron's perspective would've been nice, but overall the epilogue was refreshing and on the whole I would say that this story is probs my 4th favourite. Updated Top 5 Rankings: Stories: 1 - WtRBA, 2 - Whispers of a Raven, 3 - A Flower for the Soul, 4 - Reaver's Legacy & 5 - Stepping Back. Top 5 Iterations of Harry: 1 - Harry Peverell, 2 - Harry Evans, 3 - Lord Potter/Black raised by Cassie, 4 - Harry Potter raised by Tom & 5 - Harry Potter TRL edt. Anyway, thank you for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to beginnings of the next stop in the HP Baronverse.

TheNinja

Well not gonna lie sir it sucked...but knew was gonna be sort of bittersweet. Death after all always gets it's due one way or the other Harry had come to accept that and knew it going into that final battle. Least next one will be bit more lighthearted though so there is that.

AlexanderR

Wow, I kind of guessed that he would remain dead but it's still very surprising. And definitely bittersweet. It's rare that any author allows one of these stories to end like this, where it's not really a total victory because the hero is dead, but this was incredibly well done. Thanks again for yet another wonderful tale.

Rogue

Damn. This story was hard to finish. Not everyone gets a happy ending. Thank you for the all the work you put into this story. It was well done. I’m looking forward to the next story.

Rob M

Well that was a heavy ending. Well done as always.

Randy Toma

I'm not crying! Is someone cutting onions?

Zach B

Wow what a change of pace from your normal ending but superbly done

Phoenyx Diaz

Absolutely loved this ending, so heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time

Kyle Spence

Well this made top 3. Roses and flower but I don't think I can pick a number 1 between them all.

Jojiji18

was not a fan of this one. I really liked your other stories like whispers of a raven that is nr 1 on my list and roses being a close nr 2. Mostly am I not a fan of oc characters, especially in main character roles and the ending was for me depressing. sure he knows he has a family, but does it even matter when u can't be there for them.

Chesterton

An outstanding story even if it was a bitter one. I wish there was more romance but that just wasn’t this story. You were right to write it how you did. I didn’t love the premise but fell in love with the story over time. Cheers mate

Govs

Wow, it must have taken a lot of courage to write this ending seeing your other stories. It did feel slightly off in terms of ending with Isabel but that’s more on me I guess. I was prepared for this ending after reading your penultimate chapter.

Syndicate

It takes courage to end a story that aligns with the theme of the story, and it was very well done. Fantastic job and a fantastic story.

Niels Nanninga

Fanatic ending of a great story. Maybe not as positive as some would like but still a great experience that I raced through the end. Keep it up.

Liam

Really enjoyed this read. The ending is inline with the rest of the story but I do wish Harry and Isabella could have had there happy ending, was still a good ending regardless. Keep it up!

Enrique Martinez

I’m sad but I’m really happy about this story. It was a good story!!!!

Aven82

What a horrible ending! Not even JKR would’ve done that! Up until it got romance heavy, this was my favorite fic of yours. Just wish the second half was as good or better than the first, but it seems it all went down hill with the intro to sister Nott.

Tyler smith

I don’t under this ending?