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All For You - Chapter 21 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-02-01 14:00:12
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2026-06
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Jonathan Fish

So I like where the plot is going. The murder investigation into Amelia’s parents definitely seems interesting, but the will they won’t they crap where they deny all feelings for each other is honestly starting to get old.

TheNinja

Perhaps the vendetta stems from her being incorruptible and uncompromising with injustice. Heck most likely why she was being eyed to take over as Minister after Fudge in canon and most likely part of reason why she was attacked and killed at her home rumored to be done by Tom himself.

Kugleburg

The scenes of people goading Amelia about Harry and their not-relationship are getting annoying and repetitive. Everything else about this fic has been great so far and it kind of makes me want to see you do a story where Harry becomes a private detective or something.

Preboo

Getting serious Castle vibes from this relationship thing between Harry and Amelia, and Amelia and her coroner friend. Anyway great chapter.

TheNinja

It is little annoying. I mean I get slow burn, but even some slow burn fics have read don't generally have the constant teasing from other characters and such.

ASH

I thought I was the only one. I felt it from day one. His quips are very reminiscent of the castle. A darker version, though.

TheNinja

It is a good story, but the constant teasing from folks that know Harry and Amelia on the whatever it is between them that neither is acknowledging is a little tiresome. I mean I get slow burn, have read it quite a bit in other pairings like Hinny and such, but with those usually their is actually some progress forward albeit small, with this don't seem like really anything changed in that regard between the two.

stevem1

I enjoyed the chapter. Harry and Amelia are still dancing around each other, the plot involving the murder of Bones’ parents is interesting, and Voldemort continues to pursue his crazed version of immortality not realizing that Harry has his number.