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All For You - Chapter 24 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-02-11 14:00:06
Edited:
2024-02-11 14:16:46
Imported:
2026-06
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The intrigue continues....

EDIT: Incomplete chapter was uploaded in error

Comments

Kris Barnard

Damn. Was hoping to see someone get knocked on their butt at the club. Maybe next time.

Rogue

For some reason I’m not able to see the attached chapter. Anyone else having the same issue? Edit: Wooo time to read!

N Mulgrew

Is it supposed to be only 14 pages??

Rick Malone

Good chapter. I especially liked the part about his own boot kicking him. Also, I noticed auror Yaxley had two different first names, Cadence and Imelda I believe

Home of the Brave

Small spot of confusion for me. Amelia's new partner was introduced as Cadence Yaxley, then later in the chapter was called Imelda. Was the introduction supposed to be Cadet Yaxley?

Pious Poppy

Loving the referencing / connecting of the two stories, didn’t expect to see that these last few chapters. Very nicely wrapping the universes together. I enjoyed the small nods to things we saw in (WTRBA)

Black Lion of Gryffindor

Grimm is fantastic! My favorite character in this story. I hope he's in future tales.

AlexanderR

Yeah, this ^ - what's her name? lol

Sunny

Nice of you to add a hat-trick of references, but I'm guessing it would've been a bit too far for Arcturus to say "hey, weren't you the guy that killed a dragon with a broom and sword", haha. Anyway, thanks for the chapter Mr McCusker and I look forward to the next one.

stevem1

Enjoyed the chapter. The investigation into Amelia’s parent’s death is interesting. The only thing I questioned is the concept of ‘toying’ with your opponent. It’s bad tactics, not matter the skill, size, speed, or strength disparity. It creates time for a lucky shot, and even the best fighters are not immune to bad luck, which is something Harry should be familiar with. Hit them hard, hit them fast, and keep hitting until the threat is over.