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Hi, I finished this first short comic that is more elaborate than before, this is the first short comic this November so it will be available to all Tiers ($2,$5,$15).

=> Please read it from right to left and top to bottom.

I also prepared Japanese version, Chinese version, and No text version. (I used google translate).

I have set up a page to make it easier for people in Japan who want to support me : https://nyagato.fanbox.cc/

About the next short comics : I'm planning to do short comics about Azur Lane, Hololive or other...

Don't forget to hit the "like button" if you like it, it helps me to know if people like the genre or not to continue it in the future. Finally, I hope you enjoy it, thanks. ^_^

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This comic has been updated on the folder link monthly(Artworks), please check it.

For new supporters, please send me a message, and I will send you the folder link monthly.

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GoldenJD1003

Dude awesome I’ll be one the look out for more stuff like this. 10/10 my guy 😎👍🏾

NyaGato

Yay, I'm very glad when you like it 😄

Flan98

Wow! Nice job at portraying maou here, she looks like an absolute goddess, one could really feel her size and power even when she was simply watching them fight for her amusement much less revealing herself to drown the hero's party XD As what seems like humanity's best clearly isn't enough for her, I wonder if this would cause her to turn to venture out to seek the rest of humanity 😆 Sequel maybe? On the comic itself, loved the use of side effects in how it just makes it feel very fitting and immersive. Not too sure about improvements but I wonder if a little drawn out dialogue between the hero's party and their futile attempts to even tickle maou that ends in despair would be a bit better 😂 but then again this would probably defeat the purpose of depicting them as ants XD Overall, this was certainly a good result imo and it's great news that you have other franchises in mind like hololive and azurlane.

KC

Amazing as always NyaGato!

NyaGato

Thank you, Flan, this comic will have a sequel, I'm pretty sure humans won't give up on defeating the Demon Queen no matter how many times they fail xD Hololive and Azur lane has a lot of ideas to develop, I will try make interesting Comic of them 😄.

JAEHYUKJUNG

I think it would be okay if she, who is overwhelmingly huge, felt it as a ticklish attack on a small warrior and lost.

NyaGato

Yes, she already can defeat them just by crush them with her tits 😄

aurexo

it's good work but are you sure we read it from left to right ? seems like the opposite to me

NyaGato

Thank you, I made a mistake so I corrected it to read from right to left 😄

Darren van der Valk

This was a strong start, if this is the level of work, we can expect to see delivered on a more regular basis then switching to pay per month was not only worthwhile but the best move possible! ( ´ ω ` ) Side note: I think it's an excellent idea that you're releasing this in multiple languages, not only does it allow others to enjoy your work but can only lead to an ever-growing community. It's good to see that you've utilized the long scroll again here, it really sells just how massive she truly is while in equal measure you’re slowly coming to appreciate all her assets and curves. You know exactly how to how dial up the raw sex appeal of your characters, the act of not fitting her breasts in the panel is a testament to their sheer size and heft. This does an amazing job of emphasizing just how huge they are (─‿‿─) I can see a lot of work was put into this as the use of emotive words such as “Rumble” and “Pulls” helps depict and describe motion in what otherwise is still image along with more emotional cues such as "Sleepy" and "Boring" to heighten and exaggerate the feelings of the character. Both their placement and use were masterfully executed, even just simple palette changes in the colour of the words helps demonstrate their association with what they’re describing. For instance, I felt that the pink shading did well to tie them to the actions and descriptors associated with her breasts movements whereas the darker brown tones of the “Rumble” tied it to a more general movement. Every placement was well thought out and there was not a single sign of overuse or waste throughout this piece. I further found myself enjoyed the "uncupping" of the clothes she was wearing, and the emphasis drawn out on the word "streeetch" to visually represent the action with words alone. Your eye is drawn along the word and you’re already imagining the action by the time you reach the actual “cup” pull on the far side of the panel. It was a brilliant execution of guiding the viewers eye through the image and gave the illusion of the action taking place. I'd be dumbfounded to believe that this was your first comic. I knew how much story you could pack into a single image in your past works so I had no doubts that when given the chance to tackle a comic with its longer format and freedom from restraint of a single image that your works would take on an entirely new dimension. It's amazing to see what you can do with the extra room allowed by this medium. The story itself and the panel flow was crafted excellently. Your use of close ups to mask her full presence was a great choice as the imagination is incredibly powerful and this kick starts it into overdrive, the lack or "absence" of certain pieces makes our brain try to fill in the “gaps” to try and comprehend the scale of the threat and ultimately makes it that much more intimidating or in this case “large”. Horrors for instance always drag the ultimate reveal as we’re just that good at scaring ourselves better than the creators ever could~ I look forward to the using this technique more in the future! I love the scale of the size difference between the Hero's Party and the Demon Queen. Her tits alone completely dwarf them (¯▿¯) Always thankful when you go big with your characters ( ‾́ ◡ ‾́ ) You've hooked me immediately and I'd certainly love to see a follow-up, perhaps a visit to the human realm is in order, as Fran has mentioned. Though perhaps at a more "fitting" size (¬‿¬ ) Honestly, stellar work! (o_ _)ノ彡☆

Flan98

Thanks for the mention Darren! I believe you described everything in detail perfectly, on how the partial concealment of her together with the emotive words really accentuates how immense she feels. Also, never knew something like the demon queen undressing in front of the hero's party could feel so hot and powerful at the same time 💦, I am not too sure but I think this is the first time Nyagato has done something like this so that's definitely a plus 👍 "Fitting" size indeed 😆. Now that you mentioned it, I wonder if she would do the classic way of visiting them in her usual size, or would she shrink down to blend into their society, only to cause chaos when she grows out of their cities later? 🤔 Oh! Wanted to reply to your previous comment but I procrastinated for too long >.< , no worries about taking a while to write your commentary, always appreciate the amount of polish and effort required to write these ^‿^

NyaGato

Thank you for your comment Darren, Flan, I'm very happy and excited to read people's comments about my works, I can see what people like so I can improve on it. please wait for my next works xD

Darren van der Valk

Glad to do so as always Fran (*^ω^)人(^ω^*) Both yours and (^• ω •^) "nyaaa's" replies always make the effort well worth it. I enjoy seeing your takes as I sometimes use them to leapfrog into certain 'themes' or 'ideas' you touch on. It's also great to see what other people are enjoying about a work as with anything we all have our blind spots and it helps keep my own commentary grounded. If my words can enhance the product in any way through my interpretation then all the better! Both good ideas, while the latter can make for some fun shenanigans~ I'd personally like to see a scenario where once she's "top side", the humans are successful at 'amusing' her, putting up some form of resistance, etc., and she decides to humor (reward) them by unleashing more of her power. Whatever the case, no doubt I'll enjoy what's to come~ |・ω・) Procrastination is the name of the game, trust me I do it all the time which is often why you see my comments so late into a posts life, so don't sweat it. Can leave that honor to yours truly. Thank you again for the kind words, I shall continue to do my best! Usually it's just finding the time __φ(。。) Your attitude and aptitude towards feedback and commentary Nya are what inspire me to always do my best in comments. You're exactly right, the inherent worth in feedback is that you're letting the creator know what works and what the viewer likes. The creator can take away the positives for improvement and we get to be part of the process of curating works that not only you enjoy creating but we enjoy seeing as well as getting more of the works we want. A win-win as they say ( ̄ω ̄) Grateful for the support and encouragement as well. Looking forward to your future works (´꒳`)♡