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Sketch #422 (Patreon)

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2020-03-29 19:22:47

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2026-06

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Just got this from Wondollar. My notes:

Looks great. My only note would be in panel 4. Now that I see how the dialogues come out, I think it’d be best to split Albert’s second balloon in two:

ALBERT

I don’t wanna be woo—

ALBERT (explosive)

BOOBS! I HAVE BOOBS!

That's it. Looking forward to seeing it. :)

--Jaycee

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