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First draft of what was formerly "The Balld of Brooke Balantyne," I'm not happy with everything in it because there were some requirements that I didn't follow as closely as I should have, so there's going to be a good rewrite during the day. Expect some superfluous sections to be cut so the story gets a little tighter.

--Jaycee

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Mashugana

I’m loving the story so far. I can’t wait to see it all tightened up.

bloomingfaeries

Glad to hear it. I was going to remove two sections (the date and the doctor) and add a small dream sequence featuring Fantasia, but some comments from the customer indicated he liked the kissing scene, so I saved it. It's not going to be hugely different, but I think it's going to be better than now.