Script #451 (Patreon)

I tried writing #451 slightly differently from how I've done it before. I'm curious to see if this helps Wondollar or makes his job harder. If he likes it (and if you do), then I'll go on doing it this way. The reason behind it is because it was pointed out to me that my writing might be a bit text heavy. I wanted to see if writing in a visual matter would help me edit myself and keep my dialogues to the bare essentials.

And we all like bare things here, at Bloomin' Faries!, don't we? (Yeah, hadta do it.)

Let me know what you think.

--Jaycee