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I Hope you like it ^^

This was the first page with sex that I drew, I hope it looks good. If you have any criticisms and ideas on how to improve it, I would be very happy to hear them.

I rushed the production of this page, so maybe there's some mistake that I didn't notice.

This is just the beginning of the couple's night, there will be more pages showing the MC first time as the passive ^^

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Poiuy

Noice. Finally we get Seggs. . . . Err where did the skirt and thigh highs go. Understand if it was hard to draw . Also this is just some suggestion for the future if you decide to make more of such "art" and have the time to detail it. Perhaps for when the wife was fingering him, you could include the frontal view of his facial expression in a panel next to him . Since we are only seeing the rear view . In the 1st panel. I don't know if it's me or not. But the breasts on the wife seem to be higher than normal. Giving the illusion she is flat and wearing padding.. . . . I vote to have her peg him missionary as well. Treat him like a girl. Nipple stimulation . Maybe kiss him while fucking.. these are all suggestions. Anyway.. . . Is your health better now? Hope you get treatment for it

Yuki-chan1156

I forgot to draw the socks XD. The skirt I decided to remove because it didn't look good. I'm not good at detailing my arts, I need to study more to try to make more detailed arts A frame with his expression would be very good, thanks for the idea ^^ It's look really strange, I tried to make the view from the bottom up, as if the protagonist was in bed looking at his girlfriend standing up. But I could not convey this idea in the drawing. I still don't know how to draw perspective properly. In the next sex scene I'll try to do something like this ^^. I already have this one planned. I'm feeling less tired, but sometimes I still feel short of breath. Tomorrow I'm going to the otorhinolaryngologist again to see if he finds out what I have