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We've finally reached Chapter 2's conclusion! Even if this chapter ended up being longer than I originally planned, I think I managed to cover everything I wanted in regards to the story and characters.

We were able to witness Thunder's biggest fears inside his nightmare. The true culprit's identity and intentions were finally revealed. We got to see Thunder and Oscar's fierce rivalry and mutual hate. We saw Thunder's libido spiral out of control and give Oscar a taste of his own drugs, giving us some hot scenes along the way. We saw how careless and irrational Oscar can get in his pursuit for revenge, and Polar's cluelessness about his boss's intentions. Not to mention Thunder's squad getting some spotlight in this chapter in both the dream sequence and in the real world.

Thank you all very much for reading until the end and supporting this project! There's only one chapter left to conclude Thunder's story, but at this time I would like to take a break and organize myself properly for the next chapter, I think it would be healthy for both the comic and myself to take a break considering it's been running since January of last year. Not to worry though, I have something planned to make up for the wait, I'll announce it by the end of this month, so stay tuned! Other than that, feel free to let me know how you felt about this chapter, what scenes or characters you enjoyed the most, or anything you want really.

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Bahamut-255

Quite a lot to say regarding the points made, but let's see: Pages 7 & 45-91 I liked more, I'm guessing you know why ;-) Not forgetting Thunder's Crew a detail I appreciate Thunder's starring role I stayed most for, and how in spite of his best efforts, it wasn't enough - that scientist's messing up the dosage certainly didn't help... But this last one I really like as it shows Oscar getting fixated on getting himself dressed again, to the point of completely overlooking the tablet still on the sands, which feels much like a Chekov's Gun to me - and further evidence on how Oscar's fixation/tunnelvision on specifics keeps him from picking up critical details. I suspect this will prove costly to him in Ch.3. 22 months closing in on 23? It has been a long time

Kit

Glad to be here for the end of the second chapter. Looking forward to whatevers next!

MeteorSmash

Glad you were, I'm sure you'll enjoy what's coming up next

MeteorSmash

That tablet's probably gonna cause him big problems in Chapter 3. And yeah it's crazy to think it's been two years now.