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EDIT: A bit of a sneaky edit here to put the improved version of the sequence up here. Slightly changed the final to look a bit better and changed up the backgrounds to have a unique look to them, get a bit of that manga look to them. A bit of a surprise to those that go looking. ;)

A tall, boastful classmate gets a change in relationships when he is turned into a short busty girl, now considered by everyone to be the bratty girlfriend of the person they used to pick on the most. Now both being the only ones that remember how things were before, they try to find the one who caused this... but that only seems to add additional complications...

He was the biggest, strongest and most popular of the boys, standing tall over most and towering over one specific person, he had it all. But, after another bump in with the shortest boy in the school, it seems someone had decided to toy with his fate... as well as the other boy...

He awoke find he had been transformed into a girl, a short and busty one to boot. With darker skin and more purplish eyes to his original blue, she looked to be a perfect form of bratty girl.

Complete dumbfounded, he stared into the mirror for a long while, only to be quickly met with his mother, yelling at him to get ready for school. In a panic, he quickly put his things on, a boys uniform somehow both fitting on his new body, but still loose enough to show his much smaller size and then without even a moment to think he rushed out the door toward the school.

It was then he realised... no one noticed anything wrong? They even greeted him with his name... but as he got closer to school a new topic was being brought up... about her boyfriend...? The one boy she had always mocked for his short size? Had he done this to her!?

She rushed to find him and confront him, all the while realising she was automatically saying and doing things she didn't intend, as if forced to play the new role she had been given. When did she put on this bra!? She even had some kind of verbal tic now... "kuu kuu"...?

She had finally confronted him and, while very angry, couldn't get more then an annoyed but cute sounding rage at him, even unable to call him anything other then senpai. Her rage slowly subsided, though, as she could see the confusion in his eyes, as well as... concern? He explained he didn't know what was happening either.

While most of his morning was normal, he did suddenly discover a picture of her new form on his desk... and somehow knew who she actually was. He was trying to find her, just as she was him. Finally, he moved in close and asked her...

"Will? Do you realise... you've been referring to yourself as a girl... this whole time?"

They decided to try and track down whoever had done this, a task that seemed to only draw their ire as further complications started to pop up as they made progress, up to their current problem...

Will woke up from a strange dream to discover... she wasn't alone in her body anymore... and this new occupant was dead set on seeing senpai. And then touching him... and then...

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...I TOTALLY FORGOT TO FINISH THIS BEFORE. It was so long ago I posted the cover version to public already. WHOOPS. ^^;

A bit beneficial at least, since my wrist is actually still not all that good, so the partial work I had done made it that much easier to do up. Unfortunately, my wrist is still wonky and while I would have liked to make the background properly for this, I had to make due for now. I also wasn't completely happy with how the third panel ended up looking and feel it could use a redraw, but that too isn't in the cards yet. ^^;

For now this'll have to do, though once I recover I might get at least the backgrounds properly done up. And maybe redo that third panel better.

On to the story, a bit condensed since most of what I wanted to add would wind up making for way too long a story. The sequence even had more dialogue then it. Third panel as well as bottom part of the story is something taking place later on in the timeline, where it seems a new party has entered the ring. As for what their true intentions are, or who even caused this whole thing, I guess that's left unknown for now. :)

This does leave me without any pre finished stuff now though, for real this time. At least... mostly finished? So if my wrist is still not there by the next exclusive, I'll just have to do something or think of something? I'll figure it out. ^^;

Anywho enjoy! :)

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NicoH (NPSao)

Oh yeah, I remember this~ It's a fun premise. Besides his girlfriend appearance looking very cute with that short hair, the thing about there being two persons inside the same body, which can take turns is somewhate different from the usualy personality alteration. Also the involuntarily "Kuu Kuu" is very cute. Also, I'm kinda concerned of the words "If there's anything left of you". xD Gotta admit, the eye effect in the last pictures looks a little odd for my liking, and I had to get a magnifyer to read that tiny speech bubble, but besides that a great job!

Test-0

The personality swapping was a fun part of the idea, the concept of a second person that could pop up at any time to complicate things was part of the original concept for this one, eventually developing to what this one has where it starts off with just random actions getting hijacked to the completely new personality showing up, hinting that she was always there, just slowly coming together. :) As for the the worries about senpai getting completely demolished by her... Uhhhhhh...... I'm sure he'll be fiiiine. :) Third panel has a few things I didn't quite like and would likely redo, the eyes included. Meant to look kinda like they are glassing over, a very shiny and smooth look, this didn't quite hit the mark. A few other areas that really stand out to me as well, but the eyes ending up missing the mark is pretty up there for reasons. The super tiny text though is intended, gotta get really close to see him once she's taken over. I actually did this effect with something else (was about to say somewhat recently but... it's already almost been a month since) but it was inside the text bubbles. Tiny little extras. :)

ijuinkun

Ooh, thanks for filling out the story a bit!