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A cute, shy, reserved boy goes to a special fitting room, given a personal recommendation by another, to get a free fitting and in turn, get a much more confident look... and then getting something much more aggressively confident then he wanted... and an ultimatum from the hostess.

REMINDER: This is the SECOND sequence of the night! Don't miss out! Go there as well! :)

Now then... this one is... a bit special. If you know how I usually do dialog, you might notice this one has some very, uh, interesting wording. It's uncensored. And has pretty heavy use of swears. ^^;

There is a 'censored' version of this as well but I decided, this kinda makes it have a lot more impact. I'm not one to swear very often, so rarely in fact that when I do I want it to mean something. So when I usually add them in, they are comically hidden away. But for once, just gonna let this one ride as is. If I lose my nerve later on then... I'll just add the censored version? Not exactly a huge effort but still. :)

The dialog in this needed a LOT of effects as you might see, which took quite a bit of time to do up. Also shading is slightly different for this one, wanted to see how it would go.

Story wise, it's very... mean? Angry? Aggressive? Something like that. Wanted a very different feel for it then my usual so hopefully it's not too much. Design wise I'm pretty happy with it, though I do regret not adding in more fishnets since the effect I made up for it ended up looking so good. ^^;

Included versions without dialog to get a better view of the character.

I've been quite busy doing up both of these sequences, spending all of the night to do so ( so much so that it's morning now <_<; ) and I am QUITE tired now. So uh, next exclusive will likely be something a bit more simple. :)

Anywho, enjoy! :)

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NicoH (NPSao)

Oh, that's definitive a cool one! Personally, I don't mind swearing if it fits the character, and it sure does! I guess this one feels also a bit different because most often we have guys turn into shy or love-struck girls, this is one is certainly different with the confidence boost, but kinda hot. Also I think you did well with the text effects. :D So, she gets another person for a makeover? Where do I volunteer? Also I'd love to see the gal that recommended him. >w<

Test-0

Having come back to it, it's not too bad with the swears. And yeah, for once it's not just a love struck change, just someone that gets changes and has to deal with it somehow. But like you say, still a hot look to it. :) The text was actually the main idea I had for this one and worked backwards from there. This one has a lot of text specific stuff, like how the word bubbles are very specifically acting, how the middle panel transitions them to the final panel and so on. A lot of fun ideas. :D The setup makes for a possible prequel/sequel quite well. Whoever the gal was clearly wanted something as well and either got way too much, or exactly what they wanted. And now a there's a hyper aggressively confident goth woman left to convince someone else to go in if she ever wants to fix things. :)