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A boy that needed a bit of extra cash decided to do a quick delivery job he saw online, one about 'milk bags', only to get a lot more then just a quick paycheck...

Finished version! I'm... not completely happy with it? Some stuff I couldn't get looking right and the dialog ended up needing a few revisions. Still quite wordy. ^^;

Story wise, meant to be up in the air if it's actually full TG or just... not? As usual with these kinds of things, the answer is whichever result you prefer more. Somewhat recent expansion post might have made me want to give the option a chance. :)

Still, whichever the answer, ended up quite the cutie, with an infinite supply of milk! Seems like a bit of a sudden shift in goals but hey, a paycheck is a paycheck and if they get the chance to make more money off of it, then... why not just go for it?

Anywho, enjoy! :)

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NicoH (NPSao)

Ahh... With the dialog it's even better! Well, it's wordy but tells a wonderful amusing story. Was laughing about the delivery being actually taking the weight from the other person's chest, haha. And hey, she's making the best of it! If there's infinite milk why not sell it? Also, she's an adorable cutie. I might help her carry those! <3

Test-0

Getting all the info in there took a bit of work, especially since I didn't have too much room to work with. But it got there eventually. :) The delivery being the reception of one rather then making one was the main crux of the whole setup, which funny enough the transfer from the other person only happened because I realised it plays really well with someone getting something off their chest having multiple meaning. :) The realisation and acceptance was also a later addition, but it fits well with the character. Got the product, why not just sell it. Depending on the person, the origin of the milk source could even be considered a 'big' marketing boost. Who wouldn't want to help out such a cutie after all. :)