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A nerdy guy is stopped in the middle of his walk through the park by a stranger, who tells him to do whatever they say. He attempts to refuse, but instead agrees causing the stranger to grin wildly as they then tell him... to open his shirt and show off his massively filled bra... an action he finds questionable, but unable to resist, does exactly that, revealing a lot more then he should have on his chest...

For context, my tooth is still a bit rough mentioned yesterday. I'm medicated and at the moment, a bit of a messy sleep setup, so I might be a bit off? I think? So if the writing or look is a bit weird thats likely why. ^^;

So this is a kinda sequel to Questionable Answers? Kinda. Originally the idea was a direct sequel, but I didn't really like how it was going and shelved it and eventually just posted the linearts as is. You might remember that post. :)

Well, since that was a month ago and are going pub and I'm at a bit of an odd spot for doing stuff from the tooth problem, I decided to dust them off a bit, add a starter panel, do a nice quick simple color and stage a sequence from it. Very basic work, mostly just left whatever wherever and wrote stuff on the fly. The conflict of the original vs controlled voice in this might be a bit hard to spot, coloring is simple and the background is just a googled image. ^^;

Still, better then two nearly the same linearts I guess? Speaking of, included the colored versions of the character without any BG as well as the original linearts and the guy lineart just to be consistent. :)

...something about a guy opening a shirt to impossibly reveal a well filled sexy bra that just has a fun ring to me. I've done it a few times now. Just one of those things I seem to have gotten a very specific taste for that I just can't seem to resist?

Anywho, enjoy! :)

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NicoH (NPSao)

Hehe - I really love the idea of opening the shirt and just two big boobs that haven't been there before falling out! Also nice effect with the eyes shifting in color. I really like the idea of another voice coming out while the thoughts are different, though yeah maybe a bit hard to read in this one. The old one had a charm with all the words crossed out and all but I think that's hard to replicated if the dialog that's spoken is too different from the one in thoughts! And blonde and red eyes is never wrong. Such a cutie. ♥ Though perhaps you could add some blonde at the root of the hair or the tips in the second picture to indicate the hair color shift. Also the expression in the last panel feels a bit off to the dialog! But could be on purpose, his facial expression still aligning with his thoughts while the voice just goes along with the bodies actions! Maybe also add some blush to the middle and last panel. >w<

Test-0

The eye color shift was a fun one to do, since it plays well into the more actions taken the more he also gets 'taken', so by the end the eyes going full pink/red with a tiny speck of blue is a good way to show a change instead of tell. :) Speaking of tell, yeah the voice thing was a bit rough. I was still restricted by the tooth ache to keeping it simple and while something more like the original was planned, the entire dialog being very different ended up making it impossible. The 'overlayed' versions of both versions also didn't work out like I had wanted, so I had to fall back on this one where it starts up mostly sync'd up and then slowly separates and fades out as the other takes more dominance. A few ways to improve it, but for now it does help the feel that the new voice is just so overwhelming that it drowns out the old one completely. I'll see if I can get a better looking version when I patch it up with a bit more detail later on, but it might just stay since the real estate for the panels is a bit... wonky. Chock that up to medicated lack of sleep I would think. :) The reactions are actually meant to reflect him still being there, so it's very mixed on what he says to how he acts. The middle panel really sells the disparity since, funny enough, the outer circles for the eyes were missing when I was working on adding color. They were being shared with the third panel, but when I made separate versions for coloring, they ended up only on the third panel version, and second version only had the pupils. Which made for a much more drastic reaction that I liked so much I kept in. :) A bit more shading, blush and such should help iron out the look a bit better as you say. I was tempted to add a bit of the original hair color to the final at the tips, but it didn't quite look right and the middle panel has no mention of the hair color change so I couldn't sneak it in there either, so it ended up just being a quick flash of hair. Maybe when shaded it'll get a bit of that in there. :)