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A boy is standing here in the cold waiting for someone, eager to get somewhere hotter and warm up.

*scribble scribble scribble*

A sexy, hot maid is standing here, her hot body unbothered by the cold...

Another one! This one feels like a much better introduction the the series then the previous, since it's a lot less chaotic. Also no story for this one (yet?), most of the time was just spent making it. It's a work day and night, so time is limited. ^^;

I was about 50/50 on if I spend the night making this or something much more simple and also post the overwriting catch up post, and decided to just ease things in a bit better? Tomorrow I'll post the catch up, which will have all of the older series of overwriting as well as bit more into on the series. Likely links to the originals on DA for the story content is anyone is interested in that as well. :)

For this one, seems someone looked a bit cold and with the overwriter's help, got a lot hotter. Some of the context for how the power works, people that mentioned IN them, but aren't around it yet, aren't affected by anything scribbled in. But the moment they get in 'range' of the text box, they instantly become affected by anything it refers to them with.

It also seems to know the specific person mentioned, so only the person he/she is waiting for will become the 'master'. That said, while he/she is unaware, the 'master' is fully aware. Though there does seem to be one clause being added to slightly address that? :)

I did make a mistake in there, but fixing it would take a bit of extra work and I'm already quite tired, so it'll stay for now. ^^;

I'm thinking what i might do for when this and the previous new overwriting's go pub, I'll swap the release dates so this comes first? This feels like a better start over all, and then bring out the more chaotic after when people are settled in? Maybe? Thoughts on it? :)

Anywho, enjoy! :)

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Panel 1: A boy is standing here in the cold waiting for someone, eager to get somewhere hotter and warm up.

Panel 2: A sexy, hot maid is standing here, her hot body unbothered by the cold waiting for her loving MASTER. She is very eager to get with her even hotter master and "warm" them up.

Panel 2 Others: (UNAWARE CANT SEE CHANGES), (All heat she gives off will make her and her master "HOTTER"), a soon to be finished bubble that says (MASTER CANT RESIST HER HOT BODY!)

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WebWombat

More overwriting! We're lucky whoever has that pen only has people's best interests at heart.

Test-0

Very kind of them to warm things up in such a cold area. Not only for him, but also considered who ever else was meeting him, help them both get nice and hot. :)

NicoH (NPSao)

I like it especially because it feels really like you took the initial guy designs and changes just a few things to make him look like a really pretty female maid. Also the hair that hides one eye ♥

Test-0

Yea, in contrast to the other one, this was very direct and stuck to the same look. As a more simple one that doesn't go completely off the rails, a few little changes here and there does the job. Well, possibly a few much 'bigger' changes, but you get the idea. :) With this one I kept a lot of things lined up as close as possible, so toggling through the two panels you can see most of the direct lineups. Is a fun way to do things. :D Maid + hair over one eye is a very good look. Don't even need a scribble put in to not resist it, for most they were already there. :D