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It was always a bad day when Shalanaitir ai Mercury needed to go directly to the empire's throne room. On average days he remained with the intelligence service and did his work, on good days he was invited by the Mercury Court itself, and on excellent days someone came to him. Walking to the throne room of his own volition meant taking risks, and Shalanaitir hated risks.

He considered it one of the ironies of his position that his job entailed nothing but evaluating risks, and the remark had earned him polite chuckles at many court events. Even though his goal was to eliminate them, he still spent all of his time staring at risks.

Aside from assisting everyone in the high court who needed his knowledge or calculations, Shalanaitir was an assistant to the Emperor himself. One of many assistants, but still a desperately sought after title. He maintained that position by bringing forward obscure potential threats, even when he might be spinning out the metal too delicately and risking himself. Each visit was a delicate balancing act.

When Shalanaitir reached the grand staircase that led to the very heart of the Mercury Court, he stepped onto a silver platform instead of the stairs. It required a Ruler's cantae to use, and reaching that tier had been immensely tedious, but it was better than huffing and puffing his way up so many stairs.

Reaching the top in excellent time, Shalanaitir stepped off and bowed politely to the two guards at the double doors. Those doors themselves were heavily fortified and he wouldn't have been able to budge them on his own. The Emperor's Guards were Dominion-tier soulcrafters, however, and pushed the door open with one hand.

Shalanaitir was always polite to the guards, but he forgot about them the next second as his mind shifted to his meeting. While he walked through the grand hallway, empty as usual, he repeated what he intended to say to the Emperor of the entire Mercury Court. Technically one of four, yes, but the only leader the Mercury Court had for years now.

The name was a foreign one, fitting an outsider leader. Most took it for granted, because power was the best introduction, but the sounds wriggled in his mind. He'd once consulted with a soul translation expert who believed that it had some sort of resonance that failed to fully translate. It remained a mystery.

A trivial mystery. Shalanaitir shook his head and resumed ordering all the facts in his head.

Finally he stepped into the grand throne room. Even now, after years serving in the highest halls of power, entering the soaring chamber made him feel small. The ceiling shimmered high overhead, each column along the pathway was wider than his body, and it all tilted upward to the four enormous silver thrones that dominated the room.

His Emperor sat sideways in one of them, his legs over the armrest. He toyed with a slate-like armament in his hands, a device of his own making. A long time ago, this Emperor had been notorious for the inventiveness of his soulcrafting. The flat slate that he had created, and now constantly spent time with, appeared to be some sort of toy. He claimed that it gathered information for him, but Shalanaitir was skeptical of the way he tapped at it.

"What is it?" the Emperor asked.

"Mighty Emperor, I have brought you word of a-"

"There's nobody here to impress, Shalanaitir. I'm going to interrupt you every time until you start calling me Dave." Emperor Dave swung his legs off the armrest and looked down at him. "Really, what's up?"

There had been a time when Emperor Dave was the most feared of the four Siblings, but the years had softened him. He had never been as cruel and capricious as many of the leaders Shalanaitir had worked under. At worst, if he was disappointed he'd tell Shalanaitir to stop wasting his time. The problem was that failing often enough would lead to a loss of position in the Mercury Court.

Years of conflict had made him wiser and stronger. Still, at times Shalanaitir wished that the other Siblings would return.

"I bring you word of another outsider who may be from Earth... Dave." Shalanaitir took a step closer as he relaxed into his role. "Recently his actions have had an affect on Deuxan, so I thought you might want to be informed."

"It doesn't hurt to monitor them," Emperor Dave said, "but mostly I don't care."

Long ago Shalanaitir had been puzzled by this attitude, then he had met some of the other outsiders. They had ranged from remarkably pretentious to affectedly humble, in all cases behaving as if they were the protagonists of a cheap novel. Remarkably different from the Emperors and Empresses, both in personality and in their connection to one of the Mercury Court's greatest enemies.

Emperor Dave had returned to poking at his armament. Shalanaitir swallowed and decided to reveal his most important facts quickly.

"In this case, there is no evidence that he has any connection to Vistgil." Shalanaitir cleared his throat and straightened. "The records were very unclear, but an agent observed him during that incident where Fleshmaskers were taken to Fithe. I can confirm that he has no Artifact of Elghiera."

The instant Vistgil's name was mentioned, Emperor Dave's eyes lit up, and now he leaned forward. "Alright, this is getting interesting. But that was a while back, why bring it to me now?"

"Because it wasn't actionable. We lost him to weirkey usage and only recently obtained more information. There was a-"

"Is he stumbling around confused? Has he started soulcrafting?"

"He's allegedly reached Authority."

"Without involvement from Vistgil?"

Shalanaitir bowed lower. "Because we have limited information, it is impossible to be sure, but he bears none of the hallmarks you have reiterated for us."

"You have my attention. Go on."

"There was an incident with the Armeau family from the Anguedan Court. They-"

"You realize that means nothing to me." Emperor Dave blinked down at him. "If that's a major court I feel bad, but if it's one of the minor ones, I can't keep track of all those."

"Of course you can't, Emperor. That's why you have assistants." Shalanaitir had prepared an extensive report, but having the Emperor's undivided attention was electrifying. He'd even addressed him by his title without complaint. Keeping the report at his side, Shalanaitir instead jumped to the critical parts. "The Anguedan Court is a minor region on the moors of Socirro. We only took notice because the Demon Court took interest in them."

"In such a small court? How strong are the soulcrafters on Socirro again?"

"Few of the cultures there even know the Dominion barrier can be broken."

"Then that doesn't make any sense. Even if this doesn't pan out, you were right to bring this to my attention." Emperor Dave sat forward. "Alright, so a family from this little court gets involved in a vendetta, as they always do. Somehow an outsider gets involved. How does this end up catching the Demon Court's attention?"

"Socirro may not be an important continent, but it is the source of the..." Shalanaitir coughed uncomfortably. "The ai Teraeves situation. The family, minor as they are, was acting as though they had information about the ruins. They got involved, and even though no vaults were opened or mysteries uncovered, word made its way to me."

For the first time that Shalanaitir could remember in recent memory, Emperor Dave stood up. He rarely flew, despite his power, just walked down the staircase from his throne. Having the Emperor so close forced Shalanaitir to swallow, but he wasn't afraid anymore. This was the moment his life changed. He'd brought information that might actually be critical.

"Alright, we don't take a heavy hand with this." Emperor Dave paced back and forth in front of the thrones, chewing on his thumb. "Gather information without expressing public interest, just in case Vistgil is involved after all. I want to talk to this guy, but if he's smart enough to reach Authority, he'll probably be paranoid about me. We wait for this vendetta to cause trouble and then get involved carefully."

At this point, the Emperor was speaking mostly to himself. Since Shalanaitir had so much favor, he decided to venture a question. "Emperor-"

"Dave."

"Dave... why do you care about the ai Teraeves vaults? They were a more powerful family than modern Socirro, yes, but I doubt they could contain any sublime materials worthy of you. The Siblings acting in concert could no doubt have broken into the ancient vaults yourselves. Why flag it for our attention?"

"Because Vistgil made a mistake." Emperor Dave stopped walking abruptly and stared at him. "Sometime before we entered the Nine Worlds, he fumbled one of his schemes. You've done enough work for me that you know how he operates, right?"

"Traps for hubris, empires serving as proxies, and so on." Shalanaitir hoped he didn't sound foolish, since the Siblings shared relatively little, but Emperor Dave snapped his fingers approvingly.

"Exactly. Usually he holds back, even when the real powers of the Nine Worlds are involved. But years ago, this Teraeves family gets his attention. He shows up and annihilates them in person, going to great pains to do so. That kind of work is clumsy for him. Whatever the Teraeves family did, he needed to cover it up. Then he left the vaults intact and ensured their name was anathema so that any time it comes up, it turns into a messy ordeal."

That was more information than any of the rumor mills at court knew, and normally Shalanaitir would have been eager for it, but in the moment he remained focused on his Emperor. It was so strange to see him animated, tense, even eager.

"So..." Shalanaitir took a deep breath and attempted to return to his primary job. "You need more information about the local courts and their involvement. We'll monitor the Demon Court and investigate if they've gotten the Salebrante involved."

"Vistgil controls the Salebrante, or at least I suspect he nudges them. Doesn't matter, you're right, go on."

"I'll keep you informed, of course. We'll investigate and see how the Armeau family's vendetta escalates. Extend branches to get involved if necessary and learn who is manipulating who. But if it all goes well and you get them here without attracting attention, then what happens?"

The Emperor of the Mercury Court closed his eyes and ran his hands through his hair slowly, gathering himself. When he finished, he smiled. "Then I get to have an interesting conversation for once."

-

And there you have it, that's the book! I already said my piece about plans last time, but please look forward to the next book wrapping things up in a way I hope will be both unexpected and satisfying. ^-^

Now, right at the end of the month, I have to say that there won't be chapters for a while. In the past I've done polls about closing down the Patreon between books, but people consistently vote to leave it open. But for those who are here for chapters, I'm letting you know before the end of the month that they won't resume for a while so you can drop if you want. Also in the spirit of full disclosure, I don't have anything as elaborate as the Nine Worlds Anatomy set from last time.

I wish I had more content, but I can only stretch so far, and I think everyone would ultimately prefer that I focus on writing the ninth book. That said, there will still be some fun posts! We have the cast blueprints coming eventually, future insights, fanart, and some other fun things. Rest assured that I'll always keep you informed about progress.

All of that said, thank you for reading The Weirkey Chronicles. ^-^

Comments

Tobias Begley

Thank you for the chapters! Interesting, interesting, interesting! Hopefully you can get a bit of rest before you dive too hard into work again

John Hendricks

I don't have words to express my excitement for the next book.

CommodoreCaptain

Thanks for another fantastic book! I’ve been subbed since the Streetwise Cultivation books and I just can’t wait to read your next book!

Ferlin Sutton Léo

Do you have an idea when you will publish the book on amazon?

Tokufan178

This is big haha. Shalanaitir has no idea how right he is with the cheap novel comparison. Theo is probably gonna go full conspiracy mode the moment Dave shows any sign of interest. Really interested in learning more about the mercury court. Super pumped for book 9 now!

Dick Dastardly

Wow, I'm confused as to what's going on, but excited for the next book to find out. I'm looking forward to how everything turns out.

Jormungandragon

Man, what an epilogue. Looking forward to seeing more of Dave in the future.

Zephyraph

The Siblings were mentioned by Senka in the Chasm of lamentation ! Though we only know them as powerful soulcrafters from earth. I can't wait to know more ! Thanks for the chapter

Arramos

I haven't been this hype since the epilogue of Bloodcrete. Fantastic work.

LordAlton

Deep lore, I LIVE for it. I can happily live with more armeau nonsense if it means we finally get more of a look at what is actually going on.

LordAlton

It's interesting that Mercury is in English and not translating. That probably means it probably isn't a reference to the metal. Other material names from earth seem to have analogs in T9R. Mercury is the Roman name for Hermes. It's also the planet. Either of those could be interesting things to reference in naming your Court.

Mr. tj333

Dave soulcrafted a cellphone. Can't be a one from earth as they don't bring over belongings. Or he had some sport of access to Earth but I doubt that.

Mr. tj333

But if he is playing game that implies he got apps or made them himself.

LordAlton

I'm hoping Theo manages to give him the slip. A meeting would probably be very informative, but I love the scenes in books of characters doing the whole "Who the fuck is this guy and how does he keep getting away with it?" Moments. Having Dave get progressively more baffled about who tf Theo is would be great.

Jerek Kimble

I like this epilogue and, as always, am looking forward to the continuation of the story. ‘The next book wrapping things up’ does that mean the next book is the last one of the series or just wrapping up some major storylines?

Martin Kalum

If two emperor and two empreseses got to the Nine worlds throught a wardrobe. I am calling narnia

LordAlton

Actually, what they say about the Teraeves family is sort of a big deal. Vistgil wiped them out personally and in a way he doesn't normally act. We got a hint at that, but this is confirmation. I doubt Theo is the direct cause of that. We haven't seen anything about his story that would indicate that he did anything notable other than go to the 'end world'. Still, every instinct I have about how stories work is screaming at me that Theo's existence caused Vistgal's actions in some butterfly effect way. That or Brigana survived for a bit.

Conrad Wong

The plot thickens! *ominous foreshadowing intensifies*

Imp

Dave. It's always a Dave.

sarahlin

Thank you, really appreciate your long term support!

sarahlin

Ordinarily it would be within a month, but as I am a bit behind on everything, it will probably be a little longer than that. My schedule is a bit crammed, for example a TWC audiobook release next week.

sarahlin

Yup, this is one of many seeds planted early that will become increasingly important!

sarahlin

Yeah, this is what I was talking about with my response to your previous comment. There will be more Armeau family in the next book, but we will also get into their connection to the plot of the entire series.

sarahlin

Wrapping up the Armeau conflict, not the series!

Jerek Kimble

Awesome thanks. That would have been quite the rushed ending otherwise

Solusandra

Nice. Good to see other people surviving while giving the finger to Vistjal. And someone that prominant cant possibly be unknown. It puts an interesting spin on Theo's position. How much is paranoia, and how much is him actually being important enough for Vistjal to go to lengths to suppress?

Runcible Technician

Thank you for the book, it's been a pleasure to read and I'm looking forward to the next.

Discordia

Ghosh this was such a great set up ! Can’t wait for the next book ! And did it just mention that the next book wraps things up ?

AnythingAtAll

Oh, shit. So that's what you meant about the epilogue being further out than anyone had predicted. A court led by a seventh-tier soulcrafter... who's taken a personal interest in Theo. Things are about to escalate real fucking fast and I think it'll be really messy by the end. Poor Shalanaitir. You built him up just to crush his dreams with the very last line. He was starting to sound confident towards the end there, too. So many things to unpack! Deuxan has been fairly consistent with its French-inspired culture, but now we're getting names like Shalanaitir. I'm guessing the French-inspired names are at Socirro, but not the whole of Deuxan, though the world really does seem to have a metal motif. I'm not nearly rigorous enough to do it, but I'd love to read a comprehensive list of the cultures that inspire each world, either as official material or something fanmade. That's the extent of the Armaeu's plans? Just, 'we heard outsider say things?' I guess they were probably planning on kidnapping him, but I expected at least something more concrete than that from them - if not Esaire, then Arceon or Amaeli. The latter was even well aware of the price Deuxan courts demand of their members and acquaintances. If it's genuinely just that, they deserve to be torn apart by their court ""allies"" and fade away to obscurity. Getting a major Deuxan power involved in their affairs with a promise that isn't even concrete is a surefire way of destroying their family. And after they've expended all the resources they've borrowed from the Demon Court, I think their family is pretty much done after this. So that's where the Siblings were. The Mercury Court has to be a big deal if they're led by a seventh-tier soulcrafter who has Dominions for guards, but from the looks of it, they seem to be hiding? I mean, if they weren't, then Vistgil has to have known about them already, and could've easily wiped them out considering all the resources at his disposal. But maybe he can't? Maybe he'll show too much of his hand and deplete too much of his resources if he gets one of the empires he controls to attack the Mercury Court. It wouldn't be worth it. It still feels like the Siblings are hiding, though. I'm guessing Dave is the outsider you've mentioned has a soulhome based on a modern engine. I'm conflicted about him. On one hand, he's a seventh-tier soulcrafter who's just taken a personal interest in Theo, and there are still three others at least as strong as him inside the court he's leading. That's just way too much risk no matter how you slice it. It took Theo three books to talk to the House of the Lost and even then, he had to basically be kidnapped. The moment he senses that the Siblings have taken an interest in him, he's hightailing it out of Deuxan. There's just no way he'd stay with such a large risk looming over him, and for all his paranoia even with the most minor details, I'd completely agree with him. But on the other hand, he also doesn't seem to be malicious. I mean, it certainly sounded like he was far more careless with his power when he was younger, but he seems to have mellowed out now. Theo is still too weak to safely get involved with the Mercury Court, but assuming Dave and the rest of the Siblings won't harm him or the rest of the party, just having fellow outsiders who were also manipulated by Vistgil and are seventh-tier soulcrafters is a massive deal. Even if they don't become allies, they can still be valuable acquaintances as long as they don't become enemies. I'm torn between wanting Theo and Dave to meet, and having Theo stay as far away as possible. It'll clearly happen in the ninth book, but still. Right now, I'm leaning on the safe side, but in the same way it's too big of a risk to simply walk into the Mercury Court, it's also too big of an opportunity to just let them completely slide. All I'm really hoping is that the party don't get too involved in something they're not strong enough for yet. As a side note, while we're speaking of outsiders, is it fine to ask if Magnafor is truly dead? Did you mean to make his fate ambiguous in the first book or did he really just die? And then there's the biggest one. Vistgil made a mistake and decided to personally extinguish the ai Tereaves family. It would be one thing if Briganna died in the prologue, and Vistgil simply decided to kill her family to be sure, but that had apparently been because of a big mistake. I don't think he'd go that far if the reason is simply that Theo and Briganna grew far closer than he anticipated, especially since Senka had already brought that up in Wakespire yet Vistgil's reasons are still presented as a mystery even to the Sibilings in this epilogue. Furthermore, one of the things Theo has been learning continually is that he's not the center of the world and probably wasn't even notable enough to be remembered by Vistgil. I don't think the ai Tereaves' death will simply be because of involvement with Theo. So... did Briganna survive? We never got confirmation she died. Khaluu and Eratius' deaths were described in detail, yet Briganna's fate was never explicitly shown or mentioned. Yes, it could've just been a way of strongly implying her death, and yes, given how unoptimized her soulhome was, she can't have become a powerhouse in the near future, so it's unlikely she'd be relevant enough in the present to warrant resurrection. But here's the crack theory. She managed to escape Vistgil, and that schemer being as paranoid as he is, killed her entire family searching for her. When he couldn't find her, he took all of the ai Tereaves' resources, then fashioned them into both physical and social traps so that she'll never have any kind of support again. Even if he never found Briganna, she'll eventually die as a mediocre Stronghold without an Immortality Conduit - as far as we know, at least - and the problem will just sort itself out. Considering it's been over a century since then, he's probably written her out a long time ago. But what if she's still alive, even now? I don't know how she could've remodeled her soulhome, but the sheer amount of time between the visit to the Cleansed Lands and the present may actually support the theory. It's said that it'll take a very long time to remodel past a certain floor, but not infinite. It can still be done. And what does someone who just watched her entire family die, who blames herself for all of it, and who has no resources available to her anymore - do with all that time on her hands? She remodels, starts from the very beginning, redesigns her soulhome from scratch, and makes sure she has a Conduit this time. Biding time for when she can finally strike back against the man who killed everyone she loves because there's nothing else left for her. This almost certainly isn't going to happen. Hell, I can see you allowing Briganna to survive, but still dying afterwards having done little damage to Vistgil at best. Actually, that seems like the more responsible choice for a writer... But no, I'm a reader and it's my job to go wild! I just got a tiny sliver of a reason to hope for something better again, and I'm taking it, goddamit. No one can stop me from being delusional! Thank you for such a wonderful book! I'll leave my full thoughts in another comment since this is already long as it is lol.

AnythingAtAll

Bondsfungi audiobook!! Finally! There were so many amazing moments in the book that I really wanted to hear narrated. I wonder how Travis handled Krikree's voice lol.

AnythingAtAll

Wrapping up some longstanding conflicts, but not the entire series.

sarahlin

Magnafor is 100% dead. I realize there's some ambiguity in anyone blipping out like that, but there wasn't any intention of uncertainty. He's gone. No comment on most of your speculation. Plot twists galore impending! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this book so much. ^-^ But I tremble in anticipation of your full thoughts if this is just the introduction. =P

AnythingAtAll

God, I really should write those reviews I've been meaning to, huh? I keep writing essays in your Patreon, but I haven't made a single review. Apparently, they can really help an author. I'll get around to it when life stops slapping me in the face, at about two weeks or so. And thanks for reading my ramblings the whole way through! It really means a lot. I remember fantasizing as a kid about getting to just talk with the authors of my favorite stories about their work, and I get to live that exact fantasy today.

sarahlin

Don't feel guilty or anything, as reviews can't make a book. They're just one of the few relevant factors that authors CAN control, so we tend to focus on them. Hope your life gets to a better position, and glad I can be a bright spot in it!

Ferlin Sutton Léo

> a TWC audiobook release next week. Awesome, I just bought some extra audible credits :)

OldRob

Wow! What and epilogue!! I wonder what tier soulcrafter Dave is? So much mystery surrounding the Teraeves family, I wonder if Theo will be able to keep himself from trying to open their vaults? Also I wonder why Dave himself has never opened the vaults himself. I wonder at this point if Theo would even accept help from someone like Dave? Might be too suspicious to allow such an unknown entity to influence him

Jerek Kimble

Looking forward to reading through Deathseed without any breaks!

Slightly Morbid

I really appreciate you taking breaks between books. I have quit so many books of type LitRPG/Progression/Fantasy, because they can't see that even slice of life needs plotting to continue to be dynamic and interesting.

sarahlin

Thanks. Planning matters to me and I try to write the type that engages me, so I'm glad to hear it's working for some.

AnythingAtAll

My full thoughts, as promised. I maaay have gone overboard lol, but it was really fun just reflecting on all my thoughts for the whole book, especially since this is the first one I managed to follow roughly from its start to its completion. First of all, congratulations on finishing Deathseed! I'm excited for the official release and I'll definitely be buying it first thing. Deathseed is absolutely my favorite book in the series so far. It's obvious why, in hindsight, since there's a lot of payoffs to plotlines that had been built up even from the first books. Who knew Theo would actually meet the brother of someone he killed, what was it, six books ago? No sorry, someone he ERASED. He fed a man into his singularity and didn't leave a single trace. I think Theo's powers are awesome and I still hope his singularity consumes others that are more deserving of that fate - the Nine Worlds has a lot of people who just basically deserve to die, no question. But I was pleasantly surprised to see the consequences of something as relatively minor as that. And the fact that Jontoric didn't, but most importantly, couldn't even do anything about it simply furthers the point of that scene. If Theo wants to be as powerful as he plans to be, enough that he can conquer and even entire worlds, he must NEVER forget about the individual. Even if they become specks from the heights he wants to reach for, he must never forget that every single one of them is a living, breathing person who has the right to live their own lives. The moment he forgets that is the moment he loses because then he's no better than any of his enemies, including Vistgil and anyone else he faces on that level and along the way. Perhaps the most important lesson of them all? He hasn't reached that point yet. Jontoric makes him realize that. He's still a messy person who hasn't completely grown out of the version of him that delighted in erasing a fellow person from existence simply because it proved the effectiveness of his soulcrafting. It was just a minor scene, but its impact on Theo is anything but. The first half of what makes Deathseed my favorite book are payoffs like that. And it's not just the fact that there were so many, it's how they were handled. Every single one of them, without exception, resolved even the most longstanding conflicts beautifully. Chapter 36 is my favorite chapter in the series by FAR. It's not even close. Two conflicts with different natures and magnitudes, yet they were both seamlessly blended and resolved wonderfully in their own unique way, in one chapter. The book could've had passable outcomes to the plotlines it's built up and I would've still enjoyed the book a lot, but that care when handling them is what sets it apart. Also, coming off of Wakespire, I was glad that it stuck the landing. Wakespire is my third favorite book so I didn't hate it by any means, but I did find the resolution a bit lacking. The Battle of Nlukoko (that's what I'm calling it! x2) may not be my favorite fight in the series, but it's still one of my favorites and that's more than enough to tie the book together for me. It actually implies some really exciting things about the series' future, which I'll get into later. The writing for action scenes is stellar as always, but what I really enjoyed in particular is just how dynamic everything was. The playing field is a group of islands surrounded by a massive moat and inhabited by numerous civilians. There are three armament towers enough to match an Authority and can be driven even by Archcrafters. Taking to the sky puts the party in range of them, but taking to the ground limits their options because of Nlukoko's uneven terrain. Even the damn palace played a large role. It's a secluded place where the party could've taken out Ariano swiftly had it not been for the barrier, which is a liability on the Armaeu's part, but then they take advantage of that to enclose the party and make full use of the barrier formation. Then there's the combatants. The series continues to be creative with its powers and power system usage. We're already familiar with the party's soulhomes at this point, and most of the improvements are simply further refinements on what they already have. Theo got a lot of mileage with his tunneling technique, for example. It's the interplay between those powers that made for a particularly engaging fight. Ariano and Esaire were the least interesting. Ariano could've been more creative, but fitting for his personality as a lazy, passive guy, he doesn't even leverage the mobility of his wings until it was too late, and mostly just throws lightstorms. Esaire is just speed, then gimmicks all around, which is fitting for someone who's way in over his head. The interesting ones are Amaeli and Asantis. Amaeli's speciality is basically a giant sword that can swing deceptively fast. Simple, effective destruction that she knows how to leverage. The way she uses it to apply pressure on the party over a wide area leads to some interesting moments. In the battle at Myufuru, she kept them away from her but also focused on her, allowing Asantis to rain fire on the party while they were occupied. Her range is also ironically large for someone who wields a melee weapon. As long as she can spot her enemies, which is helped by her senses as an Authority, she can keep her enemies busy for a while. She also uses it to take non-combatants hostage, but that's a dirty move that isn't all that interesting. Asantis' main power, meanwhile, is unquenchable fire. Honestly, I had trouble thinking of how to counter that for a while since its whole thing is that it can't be put out by anything other than cantae. Theo certainly found some creative ways, like just chucking the fire away using his tunneling technique or making it really hard for Asantis to get into position and use the fire effectively. But my favorite is how Nauda counters them. They're so simple, but they just make perfect sense. How do you counter a giant sword? It's a physical object, just get strong bro. The moment she ascended to Authority, she fucking catches it. On her shoulder. I cheered so loudly when she did that. Amaeli had to use her superior experience and time spent soulcrafting to counter Nauda after that. I noticed in particular that Amaeli made sure Nauda couldn't reach the sword again. Not that she made it so Nauda is unable to catch it, but just that she couldn't reach it, because the moment she does, Amaeli knows Nauda's going to counter her biggest asset again. And as for unquenchable fire? Well, you don't take it head on, you take as little damage as possible, and you send someone who has heavily invested in enhancement chambers to basically just tank the fire in an opportune moment. It's unquenchable, but it's not unstoppable. If someone's body is sturdy enough, they can catch a Blazekindler off-guard and get into melee range. Nauda's physically-focused body allows her to do exactly that. Asantis basically lost afterwards. He's not used to or trained in melee combat. His greatest weapon also created his Achilles' heel. Once Nauda got her hands on his throat, he was essentially dead. He only got a few more words in because Nauda wanted to believe in some sort of good left in him, which is very fitting for her. And then there's, of course, the barrier formation. I really love how you keep even weaker soulcrafters relevant this late into the series. Archcrafters were the largest chunk of the soulcrafters powering the barrier, and in a battle between Authorities, Archcrafters and Rulers could still man the armament towers, playing a non-trivial role in shaping the battle. But most importantly, in one move, the barrier formation exposed all of the party's flaws and prejudices when evaluating weaker soulcrafters. Theo in particular got a rude awakening. It's funny and oddly rewarding when I reread earlier chapters and see him dismiss the Farmguards again and again without even making any contigency plans for them. He made contingency plans, certainly, but not for those weaker soulcrafters that couldn't possibly be relevant. After that, he learns his lesson quickly and effectively dispatches everyone, regardless of strength, but it was a lesson hard-learned. I'm really curious how this affects his plans and strategies in the future. He's going to be taking into account even Archcrafters and Rulers into all of them now, even when he ascends to Stronghold, which is just wonderful. How many progression fantasies can say their protagonists will seriously be considering even the people who they've ostensibly outgrown already? I love that you managed to pull that off. It also keeps him from letting the power get to his head no matter how strong he becomes, which ties into his overall character arc. But it goes both ways too! The Armaeu also underestimated Nlukoko and its weaker soulcrafters. They basically enslaved the people there because they thought they could get away with it without consequences, and that bit them in the ass in the most pivotal moment. Yes, even a platoon of Nlukoko's citizens probably won't match one of their Authorities, but that's the danger of dismissing the small details. They tend to slip from your sight and become the most unpredictable factor of the battle. The citizens of Nlukoko may have only disabled one armament tower, but that was enough to turn the tides. From that point onward, without their gimmicks and tricks, with only soulcrafting vs soulcrafting, the Armaeu lost. I love how the moment Theo got his bearings, he very quickly disables Esaire AND Amaeli. He punches Esaire really hard, which is hilarious, and Amaeli falls for like, the most obvious trick a gravity-based soulcrafter can employ. Theo loves using the floating boulders trick and for good reason. It always works lol. Maybe someday, it won't, but no reason not to use it right now when his enemies keep falling for it. The Battle for Nlukoko is not my favorite, but it's probably in my top 3 because of this interplay between several kinds of powers. Even my favorite battle in the series, the one between Theo and the fleshmasker Authority, didn't have this much interaction between different powers since that was a one-on-one, like most of the fights prior to the Battle for Nlukoko. As long as the series can keep coming up with creative powers and ways of using them, I think we'll see even better versions of this battle. In fact, I think it's a pretty major turning point for the series. I feel like from this point onward, the party will be fighting more and more large-scale battles where there's going to be a lot of different abilities and other factors interacting, instead of one-on-ones. Even most of this battle was two vs twos, although they were always punctuated by a lot of other elements that kept them fresh the whole way through. But what happens when we throw in three vs threes? What happens when Theo has to lead an army vs another? What happens when he has to face an army in an actual war, not just a localized conflict? What happens when it's no longer just cities', but the fate of entire continents AND worlds at stake, with the battles scaling alongside that? I can't even imagine how insane the conflicts will get. There's so much potential in the future! What I'd like to see more in regards to future battles other than complexity is a higher ceiling for tension. I'm going to go back to my darling, Bloodcrete's finale, 'cause even if its individual battles didn't have the complexity of the Battle for Nlukoko, it did have tension. Lots and LOTS of it. The fate of Fithe is up in the air, there's a chaotic battlefield all around, demons are pouring in even farther outside that circle yet none of the great powers of the fight are paying attention, there are political schemes running around that the party can't fully unravel while on the ground, the specter of Tymetron and Vistgil's distant machinations looms over Fithe. And when we get to the specific battles itself? Well, I'll talk about my 'least' favorite fight in Bloodcrete for a change - Nauda vs Homez. For one, they're not really trying to kill each other, so they're not giving their all and I didn't end up remembering their fight itself too much. However, what they're fighting over could dictate the fate of both the Ruling Cities and the Asplundat Movement, so even if the battle itself isn't the most engaging part, the tension is still there in spades. Hell, they were arguably fighting over the most important piece of that battle, so I was still fully engaged. And going back to my favorite fight, Theo vs the fleshmasker Authority, the series has repeatedly established just how massive the gap between a Ruler and Authority is. Theo himself has mentioned it and understands the gap between soulcrafting tiers better than anyone in the party, from both his meticulous designs and theorycrafting to his previous experiences with powers greater than him. Yet here he finds himself, forced to fight an Authority as a Ruler anyway. And to make matters worse, it's also a hostage situation with a non-human enemy that can shrug off getting his chest caved, so his greatest weapon is even countered specifically. Right from the get-go, I was gripping my seat - well, my phone, I was reading on my bed - just from the setup. How on Earth is Theo getting out of this alive? I know he will, probably, but then, will the people he's protecting die? Will he have to take permanent damage to his soulhome, which is perfectly possible? I was hanging on every word in that whole battle. It's like he said, "What choice do I have?" If all of that can be combined with the large-scale complexity that the Battle of Nlukoko is brushing against, we're talking about a battle on the level of Deathseed's chapter 36 - a battle so fucking good, it can immediately make a book my favorite. Even if the rest of the book is a slog, which has never happened and I have no reason to think it ever will given the general quality of your writing, it will still be shooting up my favorites list. More than anything, despite not being my absolute favorite, the Battle for Nlukoko has me REALLY confident and excited in the direction the battles will continue to take. And more Krikree! The future queen must get her due! Finally, there's the second half of what makes Deathseed my favorite: the development of the relationships between the characters. I don't just mean the main characters. This being the book of consequences, as you put it, naturally resulted in the party interacting and deepening their relationship with a lot of their acquaintances. I've already talked about how Theo had to face the consequences of killing someone by completely consuming them, bones and all, but something else I really appreciated is how the confrontation with Jontoric led to Theo being more open to helping House Blacksilver of his own volition. Yes, it's true that Blacksilver is, to put it very lightly, undervaluing the party's contributions to the house's growth, especially Theo's schemes. But it never really showed any expansionist attitudes, mostly just wanting to stay a non-trivial figure in Norro Yorthin, so I can see why it's not necessarily ecstatic at being thrust into such a prominent position it's not yet ready for. Still, Blacksilver has been good to the party. Hell, trouble followed them so frequently, yet the house still went with it and stood by them, which rewarded both sides greatly. Even if Theo has his reservations, I'm glad he still decided to help them. Not only does it deepen their relationship, it's also a gesture that proves what Theo said to Dhan in the first chapter, that they won't just leave them behind. I'm really excited to see more of Blacsilver, hopefully in the ninth book. I want to see the party finally take a more active role inside it, maybe getting a cut of the apparently overwhelming workload its Authorities have everyday. And there's still competing politics inside it, right? What with Karchibol being the traditionalist and Dhan being more open to embracing sublime materials from other worlds. There's so much to explore with them. In many ways, Acidmount, and to an extent, Yeshir's Gray-Blue-Gold colony, is similar to Blacksilver in that it's a quietly staunch ally of the party that the latter have yet to explore and interact with in a significant manner. Nauda has helped Acidmount greatly, to the point that she's a legendary figure among the beetles, but the party in general has yet to play a bigger role in helping them expand, improving their industries, etc. I was pleasantly surprised when they decided to go to Slest since it meant they'll be spending more time with the beetles. And it's hilarious that, of all the people to arguably contribute most in helping Acidmount during the party's stay there, it was Theo. He's the one who navigated the political perils of negotiating with a Slescan queen, quite masterfully at that with his whole haughty prince act. Not only that, he also specifically managed to ensure the safety of Acidmount even as it expands further and further. Seriously, Theo's a damn good politician when his back is against the wall. His negotation with Homez in Bloodcrete (I'm sorry I keep mentioning it, it's just such a great book!) had intercontinental ramifications. The beetles are probably not going to be the party's biggest ally in the near future compared to an institution like House Blacksilver, but I think the time they spent deepening their relationship with them was still worthwhile because, in many ways, they're the ideal ally in Slest. They're pretty loyal while still maintaining their independence, and they're friendly to humans as well as human-adjacents like them, which means they have a pretty strong foothold in Slest, something very few institutions can say. But the highlight is definitely the School of Emerald Indulgence. Of all their allies, the school is the one they grew the closest to, and it was a surprisingly emotional arc because of Navim's attachment to it. I was surprised to see Uvvah Ulim die off-screen, but I thought it was the perfect way of portraying his impending death. The party wasn't necessarily close to him, but he was still someone who had been friendly and helpful to them, so when he did die just like that, I was just as surprised as everyone - but not too much, since it's been built up for a while now. There's a lot I enjoyed, but in particular, I loved that for the first time, the party is actively helping an institution that one can say is smaller than them. They have two Authorities and two Rulers in their ranks, while the school only had one Authority. They don't stand to gain much from them, compared to an institution with multiple Authorities and at least a Stronghold like Blacksilver and the House of Coin, so their extensive efforts to help them is an active choice they were making again and again. Yes, there was something in it for them, but this isn't an institution that they can consult to gather Authority and Stronghold-tier materials, or invest significant resources in them. At its core, this is really just them helping a friend who had lost his father figure, and who wants to honor the legacy that had been left behind before it's picked apart by time. They didn't have to carve that mountain so the school has a far better path to Ruby Ericho. They didn't have to play politics in the city to send the message that the school is far from dead. They didn't have to clear the city's ruins of demons, including a titan and a beast that can surpass Authorities, while preserving it for its historical significance, just so the school can have a better reputation among the people there. They really didn't have to go to the extent that they did to get what they wanted. Theo could've just asked where the heliospike went, haggled the merchant, and went off on his way. Maybe Nauda and Fiyu could buy some materials from Uvvah Ulim's legacy, but after that? That was all for Navim, Uvvah Ulim, and the school they loved. That's why this is my favorite among the three. The party stood to gain the least helping the school among all their allies who needed assistance, yet they strove to do the most and went above and beyond for the sake of their friends. Of course, last but not least, the relationships between the characters themselves! I've already talked about how the party and Navim grew closer, so I'll focus on a different one. Theo grew quite a lot in this book, but the highlight is definitely the growth of his relationship with Krikree. So far, Krikree has been the adorable, loyal, and adorable... pet. It sounds dirty when I write it down, but for all intents and purposes, she's really mostly been a pet. Theo has tried to improve his relationship with her, but this book is the very first time that he actually starts treating her as an equal. He treats her as her own person even when he disagrees with her actions, he finally tells her his real name, but most importantly, he made a deliberate and careful effort to help her get started in working through the trauma of her upbringing as a Slescan slave. The Theo of books 1-4 would never have been patient enough to find the right words that helped Krikree in this book, but by book 8, he's matured enough that he can recognize the idiosyncracies of her troubles, and how he can help her resolve them. All of that went a long way in finally putting her at a roughly equal level with Theo. I laughed when I realized she was entering her rebellious phase when she accepted Yeshir's food from Theo, and I cheered when he started taking a more active role in helping her soulcrafting. I thought she was always going to be behind the main trio, which was fine since not everyone has to be a powerhouse. But I think she can indeed catch up to everyone, while using a design that is just so uniquely her. I didn't even think of circular rooms before since I figure there'd be too much wasted space, but of course Krikree and Theo managed to make it work. Every single time she has been sent to the battlefield, she's the six-armed ball of danger that has always tore through everything in her way. Her methods are simple, but damn effective, and I can't wait to see what kind of soulcrafter she grows into. I get the feeling she'll surpass the cantae output of Nauda and Fiyu. Maybe not Theo since he has his singularities lol. This is also the relationship that led to Theo's epiphany with his soulcrafting in chapter 36! Oh man, that was so good. I've already gushed about it multiple times, but it really does bear repeating: that was one of the most satisfying payoffs in the entire series. Bar fucking none. Yes, Theo only started thinking about his designs seriously at the start of this book, but I'd argue his revelation had been built up since book 1. Theo's plans for his first three floors came out fully formed pretty quickly, but his plans for the fourth to sixth ones were far more nebulous, not only because those reach powers he hadn't even touched before in his first life, but because he knew there was more to soulcrafting he missed. So for the majority of the series, he was taking the question of how to design his second block seriously, but mostly just falling on the design of the first block, just made stronger, hoping that it'd be enough to at least become a Dominion to be reckoned with. Then he learned about the Transcendent Monuments, which answered the question of what lies beyond the soulcrafting he already knew before, but they also just made his job a lot harder. How is he going to fit all of these monuments into his soulhome without sacrificing the symmetrical and optimized nature of his soulhome? How does he make it so that they don't interfere with each other? He may have only started pursuing the design of his second block in earnest at Deathseed, but the question of how he can surpass the power he had reached in his first life, and make sure he can go even further beyond that to the greatest heights of soulcrafting? That had been built up from the prologue. So when he finally, FINALLY figures it out in one explosive moment, off the back of a relationship that he could've only managed to develop after he'd matured over the course of 8 books? I was jumping with joy. I was so fucking happy for him. For the first time in his three lives across ten worlds, he's managed to open a path to the furthest reaches of soulcrafting. I'd waited such a long time for that moment, and it delivers perfectly. There's so much potential, and I have so many questions. For one, we know Theo won't be able to draw on the full power of his design until he's at Bupplesniffer, but does that mean he'll be weaker than the average Stronghold or Dominion until then? He's absolutely no slouch as an Authority, as we've seen time and time again ever since he ascended in Wakespire, but will his design hold him back in the next two tiers? Will it disrupt the meticulously symmetrical nature of his soulhome and weaken him temporarily? For that matter, will his design basically be unusable until the seventh tier? Or will he actually be able to utilize a partial version of it? Where it'd have a fraction of the benefits of a full design, but he'd still be able to draw upon it. I'm really hoping it's the latter because I'd hate for Theo to be constantly held back by the very design he's passionate about and spent years trying to figure out. I'll be happy either way, that's just what I'd prefer. If his ascension to Authority is the Nine's doors truly opening to the party for the first time, then his ascension to Stronghold will be their first real step into true power. The world opened up so much to them when they ascended to Authorities, but the high powers of the Nine seem to start at Stronghold. Dominions are the officials while only the ones beyond that can lead organizations as large as those spanning multiple worlds, maybe even beyond the Nine. Yes, clearly Authorities like Guchiro are part of inter-world organizations like he alluded to in Bloodcrete, but if that was so common, we'd see far more Authorities in places like Norro Yorthin making plans to join one. And Guchiro is already on the verge of ascending anyway. I expect that by the end of the ninth book, when Theo most likely ascends once again, the party will start getting involved with the true power struggles across the Nine Worlds for the first time. Honestly, I think even if Theo doesn't ascend, that's the perfect point for them to be involved regardless. Then there's the other payoff. It's been built up since book 3, maybe even earlier, and is absolutely not inferior to Theo's soulcrafting epiphany. In a way, I'd been waiting for Nauda and Fiyu's relationship for far longer. I'd been eager to see how Fiyu handles her newfound feelings for Nauda and Theo ever since that fateful day in Ichil, and even after her confessions went so wrong in the Chasm, I was still hopeful that something would come of them. Those feelings mattered too much to Fiyu for everyone to simply move on without ever addressing it properly. The real kicker is that for how frustrating and heartbreaking the falling out between Nauda and Fiyu were, it made perfect sense since the series had already showcased the unique cultures of each world with great detail. A Tatian and an Ichili are about the farthest you can get between two people in the Nine. Their environments, community structures, societies, thought processes, emotions, even physiology - almost all of them are polar opposites of each other. Which, unfortunately, includes their attitudes towards love. It's almost ironic, really. You'd expect the Tatian - at least those from the upper half of the world - to be more receptive to open relationships, given how physically and emotionally intimate they are with each other, and for the Ichili to be the staunch monogamist. But it makes sense why Fiyu would be the one fine with it, considering the Ichili's large and tight-knit family structures, which are basically a necessity in such a dangerous world like theirs and is also kind of their own version of the upper Tatians' striking intimacy. They simply have a different way of experiencing emotions, especially ones that can be as intense as romance. It all makes sense, and that's what hurt so much about it. I completely understood where everyone was coming from. I wanted them to make up and go back to the way things were because there's just no way a rift like this can last after everything they've been through, but I also knew that was no longer possible. They passed the point of no return after Fiyu's true feelings were revealed - and shot down the way they were. I held no delusions that Nauda and Fiyu were never going to be friends again, but what I was really worried about is that they were never going to allow themselves the possibility of engaging with each other romantically again. That it was going to be this shadow looming tinily over their relationship from that point onwards, not even because they're simply very different from each other, but because they may have come to believe that they don't deserve to try after how they both handled that night at the Chasm. At some point, I was slowly accepting that it wasn't going to work, and that they'll all move on in due time. So when they when they finally managed to communicate properly with a little help from an 'ol reliable grouch, when they held each other's hand quietly in the last chapter, when Nauda could finally invite Fiyu to some platefish - I just about exploded. Even the journey of Theo designing his way up to Dominion had lulls that allowed me to catch my breath before the next big development, but I was always tense about the potential outcome of Nauda and Fiyu's relationship. I was fully invested the moment Fiyu mustered up the courage to confess to Theo and Nauda despite how soft-spoken and non-confrontational she usually is. This matters to her enough that she was willing to take the biggest risk of her life just to pursue the small chance things might work, and I knew it would eventually matter to the rest of the trio just as much, too. I wanted it all so badly to work. I was hanging on every word of every scene that addressed Nauda and Fiyu's relationship. And then it did! It almost sneaks up on you how quietly their relationship progresses. I think the most striking part about it, aside from all the exciting developments, is that they were always at their best during the simplest moments. When they didn't have the opportunity to second-guess everything and simply allowed themselves to enjoy each other's presence. The one thing that always held them back is their fear of disappointing the other, that things might fall apart the same way again. I completely understand where they were coming from, especially this second time around. They now know what it's like to lose the friendships they've built, even for just a short while, so they're going to hold onto what they have even more tightly. Honestly, though? The moment they made the genuine effort to reach out to each other, starting from Nauda's apology in Wakespire, I was confident that for all their mistakes and fears and inexperience, they were always going to figure things out. Not because it's inevitable, but because when they were given the chance to rebuild their relationship, they chose to start it by communicating as equals. That's the best way they could've gone about it. And they're both Authorities now! They've now proven to each other that they're in this for the long-term. For life. Fiyu is going to call Nauda her lifemate soon! They're going to be lifemates! THEY'RE GOING TO BE LIFEMATES! I'm so, so excited to see where they go from here! Hell, you could argue this had been built since book 1. The moment we saw that Ichili relationship titles had rankings, a lot of people absolutely wondered immediately what the highest one is. I sure as hell did lol. Maybe Theo and Nauda could be Fiyu's Friends? Hell, maybe they could be her Relatives someday, like Guchiro someday. But I never expected one of them to be her Lifemate. I mean, god, Lifemate Nauda just sounds... perfect. I think at this point, we can confidently say that the trio have settled into their relationships with each other. They can trust each other with their lives, not just in battles, but in simply navigating life side by side. They've gone through so much over their years together; first as strangers, now as friends, and they've come to understand each other in a deep and fundamental way. That's the point when you know a relationship is going to last. What they haven't settled into is themselves. Theo has made massive progress in trusting other people again, but he's still quite dismissive of the people who aren't already close to him. Jontoric made him realize that. Nauda and Fiyu have mostly resolved their communication problems, and the insecurities they have in their relationship will naturally follow. However, Nauda is still pretty reckless at times, when a more delicate touch like Theo's or Fiyu's would be necessary. Fiyu depends on her Friends and is very dependable herself, but she's also very dependent on others. Even now, she still hangs on the words and approval of someone like Guchiro too much. They still have a long way to go individually. I'm looking forward to see how they grow from this point, when they've already grown into each other. Thank you for writing such a wonderful book! And once again, congratulations! Here's to many more years of Weirkey!

sarahlin

Your comment is almost 6000 words, or 2-3 TWC chapters. ^-^ Now that the gang has reached Authority, there is indeed the opportunity for some crazier, highly mobile fights. The series won't be abandoning the idea of one on one duels, however, just trying to place the characters in different situations. In a series involving a lot of fighting, I think it's important to have several different modes of it. I like bigger battles, but the more characters involved in any given confrontation, the harder it is for readers to keep track. (But yes, the overall scale will keep increasing. As I believe I've said in other comments, the more characters, locations, and organizations I can get readers to care about and remember, the bigger the climaxes I can write.) I was indeed setting up for the barrier formation the entire book; there's always a risk of playing your hand too lightly or too heavily. You noted how Theo isn't anticipating the lesser soulcrafters to be relevant multiple times, but since it wasn't called out by anyone at the time, I think I scraped by in striking this balance. Spoiler warning, if anyone else is reading this deep: not much Blacksilver planned for the ninth book. I wanted to take a break from Fithe before going back with a vengeance. There are many foundations laid there that will be built upon! I'm glad you resonated with everything I was going for with the School of Emerald Indulgence, because I can already write all the reviews about how the series is all boring, directionless, slice of life. T-T Guess won't spoil plans for Theo's soulcrafting, but you'll see different "phases" along the way. I think that's more interesting than characters keeping identical powersets over a long series. How to pace a romantic relationship over a long series is a tricky problem. Nauda/Fiyu is my attempt at it, anyway. I hope, in the long term, it will be a relationship with a surprising amount of both breadth and depth. They're obviously getting together, I don't intend to stretch it out even longer, but I think there are potentially interesting ways to continue a relationship (aside from melodrama). Thank you for your extensive comments - I'm glad the series can inspire such enthusiasm in you!

AnythingAtAll

14 more comments like this and I can write a TWC book of my own! I'm so looking forward to another Bloodcrete-tier battle! Like I've said, so many of my favorite moments in the series are concentrated there. If you can properly set up another large-scale battle, and it's most likely going to be far bigger at this point, it's going to be a party. Honestly, rereading even earlier books is going to be a bit funny with how much trouble weaker soulcrafters were to the party in this book. I can't point to specific moments right now, but I definitely remember Theo dismissing Archcrafters before. Again, I think it's really cool that from this point on, the party is now going to take people two or even three tiers lower than them seriously. I think this is the first progression fantasy series I've read that can say that and mean it. I suppose I'm not too surprised we won't see much of Blacksilver and Fithe in the ninth book. The party spent the better part of four books there and have only been outside it for two. Still, I'm looking to their return. Imagine the party walking up to them with a newly-ascended Stronghold. Norro Yorthin is going to freak. Blacksilver has two Strongholds now. Actually, I wonder what Kathina and the House of Coin would do in that situation. Would this be the first time in Norro Yorthin's history that a house has more than one Stronghold? The party did so much in Arbai so I can't relate to reviews like those. It's one thing if they think it's too slow, but directionless? That's just plain untrue. Ooh, 'phases' actually sound like the perfect progression for Theo on his way to Bupplesniffer. I suppose the question is what kind. Clearly, he's a bit of a physical powerhouse at Authority right now, but his Ethereal Monument may finally become substantial enough to be used at Stronghold. I remember you mentioned in an AMA that Theo's singularities at Authority can theoretically harm even a Dominion. And if Senka is to be believed that it's not that strange for a Stronghold to defeat a Dominion... Is Theo going to fight a Dominion soon? lol. Oh, that's going to be a sight and a half, whenever it happens. You've handled Nauda and Fiyu's relationship amazingly so far! I have full faith you can continue it, especially with how much you plan things in advance. Of course, that begs the question... is Theo going to get together with anyone? 👀 Or is he too much of an old man at this point to have time for that. It's most likely going to be a spoiler if you answer this, so you don't have to lol. But I'd love to see Theo take another chance at something he thought he'd left behind a lifetime ago. Thanks for replying! I'm super excited for the Bondsfungi audiobook this weekend. Maybe it's time to finally get an Audible subscription.

sarahlin

The answer to your last question is "Yes", but anything further would be spoilers. =P

AnythingAtAll

I'm perfectly fine with that! It's more than I expected.

Calossus

Sooo excited for the next book! Deathseed has been amazing but I’m looking forward to diving back into the Vistgil plotline and hopefully learning a few more nuggets about what nefarious things he’s up to and what Dave’s role is against him.

sarahlin

Thanks! Next book will be a big one for those long term plots. ^-^

Lewke

I’m already anticipating Theo taking advantage of the shock factor when he says “I’m sorry Dave, I’m afraid I can’t do that” to make an escape.

Oscar

This book was amazing!! Can't wait for the next book and I would love to see a book about Senka's life in the past. Thank you for this great series.

sarahlin

Thank you for your comment, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! I don't know about a full book, but you will definitely get more information about Senka's life.

JACOB HEBERT

Oooooooooo I just love this series

sarahlin

Thanks, glad to hear you're enjoying it!

Arch Fiend

Ooooh, that was very interesting indeed and I had alway assumed not everyone from earth was tricked, killed or controlled and must have some who made it to very powerful levels on their on or at least without interference and that includes vistgil themselves.

Kyle

Am I late to the party finally catching up and reading the epilogue? Yes. But! I just had to come here to say that was the most hype epilogue I've ever seen, by an incredibly huge margin! Nothing has made me anywhere close to as excited for the rest of the series as that single chapter!

sarahlin

Glad to hear you enjoyed it! I can only hope the eventual scenes live up to your hype, haha.

Kyle

I'm sure they will- I'm a big fan of your writing and have great confidence in your plans and your execution! 😁👍🏼

TwoMoreYears

I have just finished book 8, and have to accept a sad moment I'm all too familiar with. Catching up to the present in a series I have been enjoying immensely. I'm sorry to be another chapter long review but it feels more appropriate after blowing through 8 books. Mostly I wanted to say how much I'm enjoying how you've gone about writing the series. I've enjoyed the methodical soul crafting, fight scenes that don't always go on for chapter after chapter, and the main trio not magically skipping ahead to the next tier because they found the perfect McGuffin and/or did something that was said to be near suicidal earlier in a book. I'm a progression fantasy fan so I'm rarely going to complain about "number get bigger" but that doesn't mean its always fun to skip steps and cheat the system. I don't think I've figured out the twist you've said you have planned for the next book, and and I imagine it must have been tough to go a whole book without Theo ascending a floor, but I like how earned stronghold will feel. How it appears his ascension to his previous high will tie into him finally gaining some traction on learning about his friends and past. I also like that you've foreshadowed him reaching the stage where maybe he can't punch his way to solutions, it reminded me of the old saying about the best way to win a battle is to win it before you ever have to fight. Thanks for the great journey so far, and I eagerly look forward to what comes next.

sarahlin

Thank you for your comment! I'm always happy to hear from people who have caught up to the series, especially those who enjoy so much of what I'm going for with this one. ^-^

Asam Zaman

Awesome! ** I read this post using Readeon: www.readeon.com **

guillaume nguyen

I know I'm the weird one, but as soon as I heard the Emperor's name, I had the Spider Dave clip running endlessly in my head XDXDXD