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Early Chapter 51: Closing In (Patreon)

Published:
2019-07-04 22:05:36
Edited:
2019-07-13 22:33:40
Imported:
2026-06
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If you get the day off today, enjoy it!

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(Moved to RoyalRoad.)

Comments

Zeal Iskander

It all comes down to Rick in the end! A fitting way to end this tournament, if you ask me... :)

Joseph

Was there no penalty for deliberately attacking after the buzzer?

Aaron Weingrad

I’m wondering about structure on this story. We are building to a climax with the tournament. I hope that the battle with the son of the CEO can still work after we have already had the climax of what feels like the major story arc. Most of the focus has been on the underground throughout and granny. The better the tournament stuff works the harder it will be to build up tension for the next fight. I’m very curious how the pacing will get figured out.

sarahlin

She was docked a point for it, but otherwise the judges don't care that much.

sarahlin

How well it works will ultimately be up to readers, of course. The basic pacing of it will be tournament climax -> short break -> fight climax. Having two different arcs peak in close succession might have been a strange choice, but I hope that the different ways they resolve will make them work.