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Time to cover Arbai! Since it's one of the least humanoid worlds, I figured that people would be eager to see this one. Please don't miss the fact that there are actually two pages this time, the second one featuring some species that haven't really shown up in the story yet.

Mundhin vary from individual to individual, of course, so that isn't a universal design. The number of legs in particular varies, and of course different people build different limbs. But if you wanted a basic concept of what Navim and others look like, here you go!

Still crossing my fingers about the Wakespire release, but the posts will continue meanwhile. Many thanks to everyone who has supported the book. ^-^

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Conrad Wong

This is going to be a very cool world to explore!

MediumGray

This is great! I was very much looking forward to this one. One criticism I have is that the font, while evocative, is a bit hard to read. In particular at the end of the Fractar entry there appears to be some text overlapping with the image and I can't make out what it is at all. I'm just nitpicking as I'm wont to do about things I care about though. Arbai seems super interesting and I hope we get to see more of it.

Kalessin

Underneath the Napienti there seems to be a dropped word or a typo? "The spherical shape and appears to be arbitrary." maybe I'm misreading it somehow because I do have some issues with the font as well.

sarahlin

The "and" shouldn't be there. I'm curious how that happened... I send the text to the artist and they copy/paste it, so there were no other issues. I'm definitely open to other fonts, if people find this difficult.

Kalessin

Perhaps. I like it aesthetically, I just have to zoom in quite a bit to read. Maybe if it was a bit larger? I know that would mess up the spacing though

Phil Norton

I would love a simpler non-cursive style font, I know this is artistic but I have to download each picture and zoom in to try and read each paragraph.

Mr. tj333

Cool beans. Looks like there is a typo under Napienti. "part of their ody"

sarahlin

Yeah, looks like it, thanks!