Lois Griffin Shadman style (Patreon)

Here is my first official attempt to try drawing like shadman, I would greatly appreciate your honest criticism on how you think this picture went, maybe score me 1-10 on how accurate it is to shadman. It is how I can improve my work in the future.

personally, I think I did a great fucking job regardless to if it is accurate to shadman or not but i am curious to what you all have to say.