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Hi everyone! I hope you enjoy this part of the Naoko series! ✨

The next part will be the final chapter, and it will answer all the questions you’ve been wondering about, including what happened to Naoko’s baby! 👀 Expect it sometime between the end of this year and early next year.

In the meantime, I’ll be working on next Hiroki comic, and I’ll share previews soon!

Thank you so much for all your support. It means the world to me, and I’ll keep working hard to bring you amazing comics! 💕

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Darkrai_69

Page 4, the flow of the conversation doesn't seem to quite work Page 21, Risa should use "their" page 38 is a duplicate of Page 36 Page 45, "Spreadin", either needs a g at the end to complete the word, or an apostrophe at the end to show the word is being contracted, like if someone from Alabama was talking. Page 47, Alex looks like he has boobs Page 53, "around" is spelled wrong "aroudn" Page 65, Barry is missing a word from his dialogue, says "I think about to cum", should be "I think I'm about to cum" Many instances of the wrong "Your" being used: Page 15, Cucko 69 should be using "You're" Page 19, Risa should be using "You're" Page 23, Alex should use "You're" Page 33, Risa should be using "You're" ("Y-You're making me blush!") page 35, Alex should be using "You're" ("You're making me blush!"). I also noticed the second time around the dialogue colours are flipped on page 35 and page 36, but page 38 which is a duplicate of 36 has the colours the right way around. Page 37, Alex should be using "You're" Page 49, Risa should be using "You're" Page 50, Risa should be using "You're" Page 52, Risa should be using "You're" Page 89, Risa should be using "You're"

MommyMisaki’sPuppy

Nghfff amazing as always 😵‍💫 I can’t wait for the final chapter!!! 😵‍💫♠️