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WOADE chapters 61-65 (Patreon)

Published:
2021-09-02 14:27:36.531000
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Here is chapter 61  of WOADE! I'm gonna do a soft rewrite in the future and add in more content. Anyways enjoy!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_fo0aapGdWsjG8Ng0hA_HDyJbYDz1FIFR9lXnpRmK9c/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

Alex I

Not sure I like the turn being taken in 62. Combined with a general lack of insight into our MC's perspective for several chapters and the fact that I do not enjoy overly political stories I don't know if I will continue reading if this story starts getting bogged down by the stereotypical noble politics plotline. I started the story with our MC and now it is looking like she isn't going to be the main MC or even have her own driving force in the plot if disgraced noble cliche number 4 is now somehow a domain servant and driven to vengeance against people our MC shouldn't really care about.

silentoverseer
>>67442259

Aye! this was actually the last chapter about him xD, I just wanted to wrap up the arc and move on back to Calixa

Alex I

I think my main problem is that we now have this disgraced noble character tied to our MC, I would have much preferred him remaining independent and just being an external ally. Also very confused on why our MC just let him die like it wasn't a problem, pretty sure resurrecting adventurers is a good way to paint a target on your back. Would have been better as a near death experience instead of a resurrection/servant situation. Because now our MC is tied up in not just this dudes noble baggage but the baggage of being a domain of undead that also makes anyone dying in it into undead. If a holy crusade wasn't already a guarantee it is now.

silentoverseer
>>67444188

I mean, I can understand that! I'll do another chapter and post it and see what you think I was kinda torn my self

Falxie

I liked it.

Alex I

62 feels much better now. It gave future agency back to both characters and opened up much more options for the future plot now that they aren't locked into a servant/master situation. It is likely she'll have to deal with noble BS still but it isn't a guarantee anymore and him being near dead instead of undead removes the shackles of his burdens from the MC, leaving her options open.

Some BS Deity

It was a cool concept but I must agree it wasn't a good situation for it. I do kinda hope the revenants of Asteria make a return eventually though.