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The Arrangement - Chapter 2 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-08-31 01:01:38
Imported:
2025-08

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Hello everyone,Chapter 2 is now released!Read Chapter 2 Herepw: jjkAs always, if you have any comments, don't be shy and let me know so I can improve on my writing. Best,Rory

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Frank Insjersey

I love your writing. You do a great job in building up the tension in your stories and making the characters intriguing but relatable. That said, my only issue with this chapter was that while discussing the dinner in the group chat, it was a little confusing to have Sophie asking them questions about dinner conversations and interactions with a tone (and wording) that sounded like she wasn’t there and was asking from an outside perspective about what happened. I hope that makes sense. Again, fantastic job. I really enjoy your writing.

DesireDisptach

Thanks so much! You're totally right about Sophie, that does sound weird for someone who was actually there. I didn't even notice I was writing her like she wasn't at the dinner. Really appreciate the feedback, it helps me catch these things. Glad you're enjoying the story overall <3