Quick Update on "First Day" (Patreon)

Hello everyone,Long story short, i'm shelving this story for now.I've rewritten it 4-5 times already, and it's just not hitting the same as my other stories. There's not enough tension, not enough heat, and I can't seem to put together scenes that work the way I want them to.

The premise is solid (step-siblings, parents getting back together, secret affair), but the execution isn't there. It feels too much like a romance novel, there's too much texting about logistics, not enough sustained heat and tension.While writing this, it wasn't really turning me on. And I always go forward with my stories with the mindset of "if it's not doing something for me, then what more for the readers who don't know the whole story?" If I'm not excited writing it, you definitely won't be excited reading it.I might revisit this concept later with a different approach, but for now I'm moving on to something that actually fires me up.

Thanks for understanding.

(yes, i reused the assets from "First Day" 😩 it's difficult making story covers okay?)NEW STORY RELEASING TOMORROWBest,Rory