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Tyler's already all in!

I want the reader to identify with Tyler, a bit shy and overwhelmed, but Ben is gunna help ease him into it all hehe

Whew, just look at the difference between the draft and linework! It definitely helps me to sit on something for minute. I want to convey the fact that Ben is taking up a lot of space in Tyler's view, but give the reader a quick glance around the restaurant to catch the vibes