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Roses for Avalon | The Glory of Gold | Treatment PDF (Patreon)

Published:
2025-07-11 20:00:08
Edited:
2025-07-20 18:36:44
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2026-06
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Alright, alright, I couldn't help myself, and I wrote out a treatment for the second chapter of "Roses for Avalon". Whoops!

I know this story was not popular with my broader audience, but it's kinda killing me to not make it, so these treatments are the best I can do for now! The whole story is complete in my head; there will be 5 more chapters, which I will write like this treatment.

If you happen to read through the treatment, let me know, and I appreciate feedback!

Comments

Hawse

Awesome! I’m glad you are continuing this story.

ILD

It’s really sad that maybe people didn’t catch on to the beauty of Avalon for whatever reason. I personally don’t think that they didn’t catch on—I think maybe some people are “just here for the porn” and others are here for your story-work, and Avalon fell into the interests of your story-loving audience; of which there are simply less people. I personally loved the character designs in Avalon!

ARob

I was glued to this. Read it all at once. As you say, I can def see how people might want more smut but the way you write sex mirrors how it acts as a lens for everything else in life. I grew so attached and endeared to these characters - even the side ones - in this one chapter. Also, writing out the subtle internalities of the characters seriously underlined how GOOD you are at communicating those through body language and expression in your art. Something that's really easy to take for granted when one consumes it as "content" iykwim. This treatment is so well written and it makes me absolutely ravenous to read more. I really, truly hope you're able to find the time and financial space to create this story in its original intended form one day. Until then, I will be waiting for the next installment with bated breath. Seriously, it's so good. You should be proud!!!

Trev

I'm honestly sad more people didn't take to Roses. Don't get me wrong, the smut is nice, but the depth of your stories is what got me into your art and, in my opinion, a big part of what makes you stand out among other NSFW artists.

purplebirdman
>>180203558

Thanks man! Hey me too, I do wish it had taken off, but I’m still gonna keep moving and for sure circle back to it

Leonardo

Looking forward to the next treatments or art in this world. It's a beautiful setting so far!

SAMs

Such a beautiful continuation of the story, you really know how to provide characters and scenes with depth and passion. It is sad to hear that the broad audience did not latch on to the story... but I can't wait to read how it continues! You intrigued me with the story of "Little Willy", which I only stumbled upon but really made me feel certain things. I do hope you continue in your path and dont get discouraged! Even if not all flairs of your storytelling appeal to everyone. :)