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The imagery of someone standing outside the door, wanting to connect but not know how, is something I imagine most of us have experienced from both directions.Hopefully the pacing of this works. The first panel will convey twilight, a passage of time since the last scene. Might have to tweak Tony's phone screen a bit, not totally sure if I want a keyboard there or not, but I'm assuming he was probably looking at Ricky's picture. Speaking of, here's the lines for it, enjoy!

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Sieg

Woah I thought you couldn’t get this any hotter

Kyle B

The pacing is working nicely.

Josh Redcliffe

The transition panel at the top really helps with the pacing. I kinda get the vibe Tony is distracted and not even really paying attention to his dad, so i think no keyboard works. Also, I am loving Ricky.

Lalilka

Looks awesome so far!! You really outdid youself