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The drive of shame!Okay, this draft is sparse, so I think I'm gunna have to make it more interesting, but you ought to get the idea: Laurie's heading back home, a bit in shock. After all, a nice boy like him doesn't usually do this sort of thing, right?I like to make each page speak a complete narrative sentence, so maybe a panel of him walking inside his apartment and discarding his wet pants would be a good addition that doesn't overburden the page

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Delion

idk if you want suggestions but, maybe his ears lowering the closer he gets to home? the further away he gets the more his actions settle in

Alexei

Sometimes less is more. As a musician and composer the silence is as important as the tune.