The Dropouts | Page 39 | Lines (Patreon)

Laurie's having a letdown of an evening...The big negative space at the bottom feels about right to me. I wish it was bigger! I really want to convey that emptiness in Laurie's life to the readerNot too much changed between the draft and the linework. I'll probably try and lead the colors darker and more desaturated to emphasize Laurie's state of mind and the oncoming evening.Am debating whether or not the reader should be able to tell he's looking at his phone. Nobody will be surprised what he's looking at, but it might make a fun next page reveal...