The Dropouts | Page 52 | Draft + page 51 timelapse (Patreon)

Tone shift!Suddenly we go along with Freddy's POV and the reader will experience a quiet, somewhat solemn moment. The reader will not know what Freddy is thinking, but those of you paying attention might have a decent guessI may tweak this draft so the HoneyBear jacket is not on the first rack in the closet, but hidden in a suit bag or something. The reader should not understand everything but see that this is something hidden and personal, sympathizing with the theme of Freddy undressing in front of us