The Dropouts | Page 59 | Draft + page 58 timelapse (Patreon)

Better be generous with that stuff, FreddyWith Freddy reluctantly doing the right thing and Ricky pulling back as well, the reader should feel the conflict in the moment... and also note that the conflict isn't resolved at all, but merely postponed! This is also an interesting look at Freddy's character; if he was really set on not being seduced by Ricky, Freddy would keep Ricky far away, not at arm's length! The reader might wonder if Freddy just wants an excuse to feel like he tried to do the right thing.Ricky of course is here for the vibes