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Looks like everyone's having a HARD morningAll right, I decided to go with just focusing on our four main cast. These guys are the love quadrangle after all! Each of them should have some established angles, both sympathetic and non-sympathetic, and each should have the hint of a motivation that will develop! After this last scene I expect the reader to have more sympathy with Freddy than with Tony or Laurie... I expect that may changeI've felt that a writer's only sin is making uninteresting choices. I've never tried to make a relationship dynamic this complex and I hope it's fun to see unfold!