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Big beautiful skyI've always thought it was funny how the mood can change so suddenly; hopefully it doesn't come across as jarringIn the last few scenes, Ricky should start coming across as a lot more sensitive than the reader might have initially thought. In fact, he's something of a people pleaserNot sure about the dialogue transition in the 3d panel; it feels a bit clunky and not visually well integrated. Let me know if it's unclear that Ricky is talking

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Sicklewhims

Love them 💜 The transition is plenty clear imo, if you want to take it a step further maybe the inverted/cut in bubble tail could fit into that first of Ricky’s bubbles in panel 3? Idk if that would make it worse, haha

Zac

Yeah, I did think Laurie was talking, and only realized it when I arrived at Ricky's bubble on the right.

purplebirdman

Yep that’s what I was worried about! I’ll see if I can make things read easier. Thanks!