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That boy is THIRSTY!

Tried an experiment here with the layout; hope it looks good! I liked the descending visual of the draft and tried to preserve it without getting the page too cluttered. Lookit that boy SQUIRT! Good times

I think in colors I'll add something on the phone screen to make sure it's clear that Laurie's getting that text from Bill from the previous page. 

Not too sure about the dialogue... maybe the page would be better without it?

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Josh Redcliffe

I love the layout and especially love the gorgeous pose Ricky has in the 4th panel. I do agree about the dialogue though, the first speech bubble feels a little clunky

F'yacin

Oh my god these are amazing. I would have loved to see more of the oral, but the dynamism of the panel as a whole is incredible

person

Omg why did I have to see this at work! 😭 This is so hot omg I wish I was Laurie

person

Also nah it's perfect in my opinion, dialogue fits

Sieg

Never get tired of seeing those horse nuts swing

purplebirdman

Yeah thanks! It was a good excuse to do some fun pair poses

purplebirdman

Better not browse my Patreon at work haha but thank ya