The Dropouts | Page 79 | Lines (Patreon)
Published:
2026-11-05 21:00:07
Imported:
2026-11
Content
That boy is THIRSTY!
Tried an experiment here with the layout; hope it looks good! I liked the descending visual of the draft and tried to preserve it without getting the page too cluttered. Lookit that boy SQUIRT! Good times
I think in colors I'll add something on the phone screen to make sure it's clear that Laurie's getting that text from Bill from the previous page.
Not too sure about the dialogue... maybe the page would be better without it?