Chasing Charlie | Page 16 | Lines (Patreon)

Whew, big redraft

The big negative space in the bottom of the page seems essential to communicating the emptiness in Josh's life after Charlie leaves. That kiss lingers long in his mind, I'm sure

There's a lot of text here so I might reorganize it. I don't like the way the hand is obscured

Apparently Josh kept one of the keys to his testarossa