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The tone of this page isn't quite right, but the meat of the thing is here

Jolan, who's been established to be a thoughtful person, is gunna drop some thoughts on the nature of wielding or being a hammer. He leaves Roshim a little unsettled. That's all here. But I think it's a little tritely delivered

Gotta ruminate on this!

As always, thanks for listening to my rambling. It helps to put my thoughts in order on these posts 

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Mr. Morebucks

Hm... Maybe something along of emphasizing "create and destroy" it focuses more on "A hammer, like any tool, can only serve its owner in the ways its owner allows."? Hope that helps!

purplebirdman

Yeah I wanna emphasise “create and destroy” for thematic reasons but it’s definitely clunky as written