Roses For Avalon | Page 79 | Draft (Patreon)

One last interaction between Guile and Avalon before the chapter closes out! Surprise: he's not dead or anything, just a little shook

The monologue is Leily speaking. Maybe I need a lead-in panel to make that more clear? The text may be too long and confusing; maybe I can trim that too

I think I might end the narrative with one more stunner page of the group leaving this city to bookend the chapter. Ending it on this rather busy page is a bit much

Let me know your thoughts if you got em