Clipped Wings - Roots and Rims (Patreon)

[All Characters depicted in the story are consenting adults over the age of 18.]

Ariel figures out what the price is to get her mech repaired.

I'm not too sure how to feel about this story honestly. I started out with one idea of it, and I've sorta ended up here. With this chapter, you all can sorta understand the stakes and reasoning for Ariel. What are your opinions on it? Cut the story? Keep going? Change to something else?

I'm open to suggestions for this one, even though I do have a loose ending planned for it.

Google Doc Link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQqEUStfUpm1doHNBIiHUv_dgSOE3xyqPa5DDsHLbEz4-7wrxgnI3qCV6WnzNaLOADsZdMMa_cKUfJZ/pub