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[All Characters depicted in the story are consenting adults over the age of 18.]

Naomi undergoes her graduation.

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Apologies for the delay, I completely forgot I had my landlord showing up...

Spoilers below!

We made it! All the way to the end of this story! It certainly took a lot longer than I wanted, and it didn't even end how I wanted imagined it. But, I do think ending it on Naomi POV is better, than ending on Kyle POV. Even if there's still questions left unanswered. So I'll happily answer any questions you have in the comments. I'm sure a lot of you are wondering what happened with Kyle, so I'll just tell you. Essentially he chose the path of ignorance in the end. If Kyle POV was chosen, the ending was going to be him learning the truth of who Yana was, what the shrine was about, and more importantly, seeing Naomi taken from him. In the end, he would be offered a deal by Yana, choose to simply forget all of his connection with Naomi, and instead be happy that his career was going to take off. Opting to forget the pain of losing Naomi to Yana, and instead embrace a happier life. Thank you all for reading and coming this far with me. I am rather excited to show you all what's to come next.

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Slipo

Gz on finishing another one. Looking forward to the next. :)

LilBilly

Well that was not at all what I expected but I suppose it was the will of the people. Sex was hot.

Nope

I read it! Pretty hot, but I think strictly less hot than the other option would have been. To an unfortunately large degree. We've been dealing with so much dreamy demi-hypnotic brainwashed 1 on 1 Naomi Yana play that it hardly seemed to be cuck at all in the moment, just a series of wavering mindset blowjobs as Kyle mines rocks with the audience left hoping that their "relationship that would have been" 's memory will glimmer enough to cause an inflection point. It was all "cuck if" and we've skipped the "if what?". Anything other than the second boot finally dropping seems a mistake considering the entire story and the context to the sex were all those half memories and tension about Kyle, along with interruptions about Kyle's conception of what's going on. I still enjoy that the large futa cock entered the woman, but as far as I'm concerned "A sad man I don't recognize leaves" isn't cuck payoff, and this is a whole story of cuck setup that now lacks its actual climax. Still very hot along the way, but a painfully disappointing end considering this was my favorite futacuck story from you until this point. Over a dozen chapters of setup to a single penetration that's now untethered to the weight the entire tale seemed intended to provide. This vote has deeply burned me.