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[EDIT: after writing the first four pages, it seems like it's going to be WAY too restrictive in the story telling to force the rhyming narration. I decided to dump it]

I feel like I'm going to regret doing the Dr. Suess with this book but I used to be really good at rhyming and we'll see how long I can keep it up! Hopefully for at least 40 pages!

Just like any children's story, this book will have plenty of life lessons for young women as well as really anger the anti-woke! LOL!

Let me know any comments you have about the legibility. I was working really hard on trying to separate the narration while still making it legible.

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James Katarn

what a magical day! I love the rhyme! At first i envisioned it being more of a "golden" book but i love this

Julia Sinope

I’m so sorry. I had to dump that. It was really killing the story telling.

James Katarn

I love the pose, her leg up, her hands clenched

James Katarn

will you be doing an art only version?

Whomp

I'm getting conflicted feelings because I'm a bit sad to see Lorna's breasts get smaller but I also love her and would never stop supporting her.

RH

Hmmmmm . . . A regular diet of itty bitty tits . . . meh . . .

Julia Sinope

Alright. I may have to throw some Bailey or Holly drawings in who are our resident BBB girls!

Julia Sinope

Right! I’ll post the art only as well! Thanks.

Aaron S.

It’s just social programing telling us what is ideal. I chose a while ago to make my own mind up as to what is beautiful to me.

Aaron S.

this hits my particular ideal preferences, for what that’s worth…